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Grizzly Nation


Hi i'm just someone who writes fanfics join the Grizzly Nation and im new and if you like a story or can tolerate a story then show support to give me even more inspiration to write.

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What is going on? What am I, where am I? Why do I walk through the dreams of abnormal horses? I was just a regular guy and now I'm walking through the dreams of sapient horses. My 'powers' rip me from this dimension to one that I'm never meant to set foot in.

Any sapient creature needs some kind of guidance, someone or something to look after. Something to stand by, a right and a wrong, everyone needs morals. I'm something of a symbol of guidance, I didn't ask to be but I grew into it. Ponies channel all their negative emotions into their dreams, all their hate, sorrow, heck even lust if they consider it bad.

I don't think I'm a god by any standards, I just picture myself as someone who helps. Dreams are powerful especially pony dreams, they have so much magic packed into them! Though dreams can get a bit freaky, trust me they get weird.

But why was I chosen, why am I so special? Is this some kind of joke or is it destiny? What purpose do I have here, why can't I just have a normal sleep? One dreamless night is all I ask for, helping someone out each night is kinda draining. Maybe this is all just a dream, or...maybe I'm dead.

Just, please, don't let the horse on the moon catch me.

Featured 2/12/19, even though it was for a short time it was still awesome, thanks guys!

Chapters (3)
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Comments ( 23 )

A+
hope you work on this soon

Can’t wait to see where this story leads to!

This is a interresring idea and I really like it. I will definetly stick around for more:twilightsmile:

Moonbutt might kick his ass.

Probably, actually.

Interesting ill definitely be sticking around

It's a nice chapter and I like your idea of developing the character. However since you're always using a first person storyteller, I think it was very easy to loose track of who spoke at the moment. But don't get me wrong a consistent narrative perspective is a good thing, maybe just try to make a little comment about who tells the story at the moment. This possible solition brings its own problems and callenges and I don't really have the expertise to tell you how you can fix the underlying problem I just wanted to point out what I think is, or could be, a little problem in this chapter.

Other than this a good chapter in my opinion and I'm looking forward to more. :twilightsmile:

Yeah I might start putting in a header for each cut to let you know who's talking. But thanks for comment, im always accepting criticism!

I assume this is going to be noticeable after a while, Adam appears in a bad dream and makes it good, only for him to be blown apart by the moon.

Nice chapter keep it up

Oh god damit. I just wanna read more :raritydespair: :rainbowlaugh:

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Well expect a chapter sunday or monday

Hmm different. Will watch this...

Interesting story. Tagged it for now.

I closed my eyes with confidence. I was ready to fight back.

Adam probably need a dream charm like dreamcatcher to give him a fighting chance. It also depends whether he is immune to cuteness overload or not.

Woohoo! I love stories like this. Good job,

Hope to see more

I like the idea that Nightmare Moon is still hanging around Luna. Also this misunderstanding lol. Should prove for a good fight.

YEAH! SCREW THE MOON!

The next chap will be interresting. :rainbowdetermined2:
My guess on how it continues would be that :



Big Theory
Adam meets Fluttershy in her dream and they start to get along, Luna arrives misinterprets the situation and starts to fight Adam. :facehoof:(Maybe something happens to Fluttershy that prevents her from telling the others he comes in peace)

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