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blackhotmetal


I like space, Sci-Fi, Ponies, and occasionally writing.

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A guy named Dante gets Administrator privileges on a Minecraft server and discovers a broken plugin while doing server development. The next day he wakes up in a curious new world with all his admin abilities. Will he make friends, or will the ponies fear his power? His appearance will change history. Whether the change is good or bad is up to him to decide.

Edited by the fantastic: Doggyshakespeare

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Chapters (6)
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Comments ( 280 )

9327076
Well is it really that surprising?

9327169
No. Give him the legendary artifact:

The Banhammer.

9327171
What, is he going to ban people from life?

9327176
....Yͫ͆͛̉ͮ̐̍̊̓̊ͣ̑̌̃͋̇̇͒̚҉͏̬̘̣̮̻͎͙͉̪͓͘͞͞ͅͅE̶̛͇̭͚̺̙̹̹͕͙̖̣̹̫̍̀ͤ̋ͬ͑̂ͬ͌̋ͯ͂ͥͭ̋́͆̚S̸̷̫̙̣̗̮͕̺͚͖̜̲̲͙͓̼̥̱͛̋ͫ̐̀ͨ̂̏̅̈͊̃̕̕͟

9327182
I ban you from this world! *Smacks Sombra, who explodes into a shower of gore.* .......Bye.

This is fucking awesome so far,

Yknow I actually own a server and I gotta say this is an accurate representation of how I actually deal with people I don’t take seriously

I like story

9327185
Dark... and here I thought that they would just pop out of existence, maybe in a shower of confetti or something.

9327205
Nah, prefer a little bit of insanity mixed with sparta madness

9327236
M̵̨̢̢̟͍̼̲͎̲̏̽̉͜O̶̢͇͖̟͔̅͒͒̚͜Ŗ̵̧̱̗̣̙̼̗̼̔̽̈́̓͌̈͠͠Ḙ̶̩̣̞̪̬̏̾̾̂͌̕ ̶͈͓͚͙̪̯̐̈́̃̏͝M̵͓̠͔͙̮͔͈̰̼͆̉̆́Ȧ̵͚͖́́̒̽̓̓̈́͒͝D̷̡̗̩̺̭̈́̂͋͑̾͛́͒͊̀͌͘N̴̡̡̼̗̻̫̠͍̅̓̃̽̎̑͌È̶͚͉̫͖͜S̵̡̠͎̪͉̞̟̟͇͙̼̜͋͛̂̑͌̾͝Š̵̥̖̎̒͒̋̊̌͋̌̚͘̚

Hmm...
This might say something about my mind, but I wonder if /kill @a would work...

9327247
¡̴̞ͬͧ̊ͬ̎∀̴̧̪̥̟̠̺̪̥͖ͪ̽ͣ̔̈́͐̕┴̯̗̣̞͎͙̭̈̊́̚͜ɹ̶͖͈̟ͦͫ̇̽͋͡∀̶̛̪̒ͦ̏̒ͦͭͥԀ̤̠̼̲͇ͤ͂̈́̑ͧͫ̽͒̍͞S̬͔̜̏̓͋ͥͧ̽ ̴͓̱͖͉͓͍̗̲̎ͯ̎̾̌͋¡̇̎͂ͭ̔ͭ̄ͪ̔͏͏͔̼̦̤̠͍ͅŞ͈̲̬̩͒͛ͬ͛̆͛̽͟I͈̫̳ͣ̑͗ ̘̥̬ͦ̏͌ͤ̋ͦͣ¡̤͎̺̗̉̽ͪͮͥͤͪ́S̍͐͂̌̈ͫͩ͏̳̭̙͕̝͜Ī̷̹ͮ̅͋͐͝H̩̥͙̬̯̭̲͐̏͛̐ͥ̐͞┴̩̣̻̮̫͚͇̆̐̅͋͒̀͊͟ ̸̴̢̫͖̙̣̮̩̰̞̃̌ͦͧͯ̋͐ͭ̚¡̜͇̤ͭͥ͒̊̃ͨ̽́͗́O̊̾͌̆̄͑҉̠͖̕Ṇ̷͇̮̾͒ͯ

9327194
Experience makes for good storytelling...

I was expecting this to be dumb, and I'm really surprised, especially that the console command invocation isn't as tacked on as it could be. It seems inconsistent that console commands can target ponies but none of the ponies have name plates, since those ultimately reference the same thing.

Ok, for a 1st story this is very good.

You can fly in creative. I wonder when Dante will realize this.

Haha this is intresting a Minectaft story

Continue?
<YES> [NO]
Plz continue!!!

2 questions:
1) when will Dante use commands to give himself speed 255 and run the length of a race with Rainbow instantly (because it is bound to happen)?
2) will the material capabilities of Dante update as Minecraft updates in real life? such as suddenly having all the new crafting blocks and scaffolding and bamboo etc. when 1.14 comes around.

9328198
Good, it was already selected!

..... A good minecraft crossover? Is the world ending? ARMAGEDDON! CHAOS IN THE STREETS!

9328223
idk about good, yet. It's a bit too short to really tell.

But there's a lot of potential.

9328173
Thanks for the food for thought friend.

9328344
Thanks to you. I just realized I can colour my text. thanks.

9327907
Some lasers can kill while in creative!

9328424
You are also welcome!
We are helping so many people today! YAY! :pinkiehappy:

in response to the text in the cover art;
╎ ᓵᔑリ ↸𝙹 ᔑリ||ℸ ̣ ⍑╎リ⊣ ʖᒷℸ ̣ ℸ ̣ ᒷ∷ ℸ ̣ ⍑ᔑリ ||𝙹⚍
It is a bit hard to read, but works!

I think he is way to calm about being in magic pony land. And who would reasonably say 'oh hey im in that minecraft server I was building, neat' with no panic. You should slow the story down, to much is happening in far to few paragraphs.

9328163
Glich text generator and upside-down text generator

More criticism! I don't think twilight would act like that at all. She's cekestias protege and one of the smartest ponys in equestria. She wouldn't instantly throw a giant laser beam. She definitely wouldn't be as Carless to throw it inside and knock herself out to do it.

9328596
I understand what you mean, and I appreciate the feedback.

Hmm, some pacing issues ofc, but this is pretty good. Haven't read a good MC/Pony fanfic in ages, I'm really looking forward to this. The idea with the admin console thing is genius too, I love it. Also, there goes World Hunger with his new powers :p

9328611
Oh, which mod at the comment options are those generators? They might be useful in a story.

9328774
They are separate websites like this

9328820
Ok, how do I send it to a comment or story?

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