• Published 16th Nov 2018
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Words on a Page - Tranquil Serenity



Spike finds something interesting while cleaning. Something he never thought somepony would treat so poorly.

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Words on a Page

The feather duster brushed back and forth, sliding across the wood desk with a rhythm in tune with the song Spike was singing as he cleaned. Today he had been decidedly thorough with his tidying, this time finding himself diligently at work in Starlight Glimmer's room in the palace. He lifted a small porcelain unicorn figure to get the dust beneath it, placing it gently back afterwards. He smiled in satisfaction at his work thus far, the room was practically gleaming—or glimmering, as the case may be. Suddenly, however, the little dragon noticed something.

"Ah ha!" he said aloud. "Thought I would miss you there, didn't you?"

The recipient of his words was an inanimate object that had just fallen into his line of sight - namely a sloppy, off-center bedsheet.

"Not on my watch, blanket!" he announced in jovial determination, approaching the bed.

Reaching out to readjust the rebel comforter however, his right foot struck against some unknown, light-weight object - and he felt the impact cause it to push something further underneath the bed.

"Huh?"

Spike bent down, reaching a claw under and feeling around. Grasping something, he pulled the mystery item out and held it aloft to get a good look.

"A book?"

It really wasn't surprising to see one of these in the castle, let alone in Starlight Glimmer's room... but under her bed? That was a little strange. Not that Spike had made a habit of looking underneath pony's beds mind you, it's just that it really wasn't the place for a book. Starlight knew how important every scroll and hardcover in Twilight's library was, and yet this one was just tossed underneath a piece of furniture to gather dust...?

Spike opened the purple cover and scanned the page. It definitely wasn't a printed book. Whether it had been written by a unicorn's horn, a pony's mouth, or the claw of some other creature he couldn't say... but the fact that it had been made in such a way, and was likely the only copy in existence, just made it all the more valuable. Spike would have to have a talk with Starlight about this.

Clyde and The Lost Pearl of Trottinghoof by April Mist

Spike blinked. He didn't recognize the title or the author, but it was probably one of those books from that box Twilight had received early yesterday morning. The books had been so small in number that she'd ended up putting them all away on the shelves without needing to ask for his assistance. Well, he'd been cleaning for a good long while, and now that he had a new book in his claw, he figured he might as well read it. It sounded like the perfect way to relax after all that work. And who knows? It could just turn out to be really good!

The little dragon sat down on the floor, turned to the next page, and began to read.

---*---

...the stallion laughed heartily, for after an adventure such as he'd had, the lessons he'd learned had helped him not only to come to appreciate life, but also the insurmountable number of wonderful little moments it was made up of... each one just making it all more worth the living.

THE END

Spike smiled contentedly as he closed the book. It had only taken him a few hours to finish, and the story had been amazing! Clyde was a great action hero! And the story had ended so well! Spike would have to ask Twilight to order some more stories by April Mist right away, and hopefully the book he'd just read had a sequel too!

The little dragon stood up and stretched after sitting for so long, then he turned to head out the door with the book in his claw. Abruptly, however, the door swung open and in walked Starlight Glimmer.

"Oh, hey, Spike! Watcha do-OOOOING!" The unicorn's expression had gone from nonchalant to panicked in just a matter of split seconds, and her volume as her sentence changed from cohesive to desperate gorilla was increased astronomically.

"Ow," Spike said, rubbing an ear. "I was just heading downstairs to put this old book away. I found it on the floor while I was cleaning. Starlight, you really should treat Twilight's books better, and my ears wouldn't mind a little more consideration as well."

"Oh! You found it while cleaning just now?" Starlight grinned broadly, her tone nervous. "Yes. Definitely. I will totally be more careful with Twilight's books. Um... Why don't you just give it to me and I'll put it back where it belongs?"

"Naa. I'm headed down there now anyways. No point in you bothering."

"But—" Beads of sweat slid down her forehead. "I haven't finished with it yet!" she blurted out.

"Oh." Spike paused. "Well, seeing as you haven't finished reading it yet, I suppose I could give it back to you... as long as you agree to take better care of it this time."

"Oh, I promise!" Starlight agreed, quickly reaching out a hoof for him to give it back to her.

"Say, what part are you at?" Spike asked curiously.

Starlight froze. "...Part?"

"Yeah, what part?"

The unicorn's eye twitched. "Sp-Spike... did you...?" She gulped, "read... it?"

"Did I ever!" he exclaimed enthusiastically. "I couldn't put it down! Clyde was incredible! The way he started off as a lowly scholar pony and then ended up getting caught up in the mystery of the lost pearl, and then there were all these villains trying to get at him and...!—Oh. Right. You haven't finished it yet, have you?" Spike grinned sheepishly.

Starlight Glimmer laughed nervously. "Ha ha. Nope!"

"Oh. Well, anyways it was really good! You'll really like it!" Spike passed the book to his friend on his way out, and with the door only half-closed behind him, he peeked out and said, "Say, I'm going to ask Twilight to see if she can find any more April Mist stories. If she does, I'll let you know too!"

Starlight smiled warmly over her shoulder at him. "Thanks, Spike."

"No problem!" He chirped back in reply, just before tightly closing the door behind him and bounding down the palace stairs.

Starlight Glimmer turned to look at the novel in her forehooves, cradling the lavender cover with a strange sense of wonder, as if she were looking at it for the first time. She opened it up to the title page.

Clyde and The Lost Pearl of Trottinghoof by April Mist

She thought about these words for a moment. Then the glint of decision shone in her eyes. Her horn lit up with her magic, and she enveloped the quill pen on her desk with its teal aura. Dipping the feather point in the ink well, she brought it in close and crossed out the pen-name, writing something in just beneath it. With a sense of deep of satisfaction she read the new inscription, her smile wide and her heart full.

Clyde and The Lost Pearl of Trottinghoof by Starlight Glimmer

The unicorn closed the book and hugged it close to her chest. "Now I'm finished," she said contentedly.

Author's Note:

December 2nd, 2018: Henceforth, please direct your grammar and spelling corrections to PM. Thank you. :twilightsmile:

Comments ( 119 )

Even though the punchline of it being done by Starlight was kind of obvious for me, still love it. Don't find a lot with Starlight doing fanfics. Usually Twilight.

Or Rainbow Dash. But hers are usually bad.

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Thank you. :twilightsmile: Yes, but in this case it was an original. :raritywink: Yeah, I can see what you mean. Could you pretty please hide the spoilers in your comment though? Some people might still be surprised at the end. :twilightsheepish:

Awe, that was sweet:pinkiesmile:

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Thank you! I'm glad you thought so. :twilightsmile:

Well that's quite lovely. It's pretty clear to me what the ending would be halfway through, but the writing's still very enjoyable and the way you wrote the character's really believable, very much like the way they'd act in the show. 'Tis a good slice of life. I like it.

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Thank you so much! I appreciate your taking the time to comment. :twilightsmile:

I had no idea starting this how it would end up. It was satisfying.

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:yay: Yay! I'm so glad you liked it! :pinkiehappy:

Ya know, I was gonna say something about the title including your author's name, but after reading the story... I can only applaud you for it. Gj on that, dude
In regards to the story's contents, I can't say I didn't see the ending happening about halfway through. But I still really enjoyed it. I feel the emotional weight would have hit a lot harder had the story been longer, but again, it was really good. So, you know, great job mate!

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Thank you for your detailed comment, and I'm very happy you enjoyed the story. :pinkiesmile:

So does Spike Just assume that every book in the castle belongs to Twilight?

Admittedly, I kind of predicted Starlight had written it, but I didn't expect her to actually take credit for it. It was really sweet, and felt perfectly in tone with an MLP episode :) Also, I love the automatic rule in the castle that every book belongs to Twilight; domestic friendship castle life is one of my favourite things in fanfiction!

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Aww, thanks! I'm so glad you felt that way about it. :twilightsmile:

I... this is really cute, and suddenly why your name is in the title makes 100% more sense! And it's a good reminder of how having just a little bit of positive feedback can go a long way for a writer's confidence!

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My name is in the—Oops! :twilightoops: That was actually an accident. I copy-pasted the name of my document. :facehoof: Thanks for pointing that out. :twilightblush:

Ahem. Yes. Thank you! I'm very happy you enjoyed the story. :twilightsmile:

Also, the pony in your avatar is super cute! :pinkiehappy:

Twilight is going to love Starlight more than ever once she finds out. :pinkiecrazy: The fact she not only writes books, but great books.

The fastest way to book horses heart is through literture and magic. And it looks like Starlight is great at both here.:twilightsmile:

Heckin cute story, you earned a like and more

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Haha! I could definitely see Twilight really wanting to read something Starlight wrote, and Starlight feeling uneasy about sharing it. Once the hesitations subsided though, it would be fun to see them bond more as friends because of a shared interest like that. :twilightsmile:

Can relate to Starlight, this was a nice short read! Good job

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Thank you so much. I appreciate it. :twilightsmile:

I can certainly understand why this was Featured.

This was a cute little story. Have a like.:twilightsmile:

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thanks for fulfilling my daily dose of adorable with that

This was really cute! :pinkiehappy:

Obvious ending
BUT SO SWEET

Nice
1 👍 out of 1

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Haha! :pinkiehappy: I'm glad you liked it that much. :twilightsmile:

That was a sweet, short story. Thank you :pinkiesmile:

This was a cute little story. It would be really neat if you continue it, did Starlight write other books under that pen name? I kind of want to see Spike and Twilight find out about it too. It's a really interesting idea you've got here, even if it is only meant to be a one shot.

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And thank you for reading it. :raritywink:

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Thanks! I've been pleasantly surprised by all the people who like it so much! :pinkiehappy:

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it's a really relateable story for most active writers on the site.

What a wholesome story...:pinkiehappy:

A short animation of this would be amazing. :derpytongue2:

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"Wholesome" - one of my favorite words ever! :pinkiehappy: Thanks so much for the encouragement! :twilightsmile:

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Well that’s a flawed way of thinking.

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Admittedly, that is often the case with assumptions. But the majority of the books in the castle definitely belong to Twilight. Percentage-wise, one could argue that the facts were in his favor. :moustache:

My man, I like your style: it isn't (what we could call) irritably elaborate, as many are, but simple and effective, not saying too little but no more than it needs to. Good pacing again as a result and more good use of language. I did see where the story was going, but so what, you took me there very nicely. As I commented on your other story, it's pretty tough to pull off 1000-word one-shots on account of how little space you have to say anything and get it to come across as meaningful; you managed pretty well once again! And to top it off, you've been quite prolific of late, no? Recently, I've scrolled past a few of your stories, I think, and now, it seems, I'm reading them, hehe. You're doing great, bud. Pleasant little SoLs everyone can enjoy – never a bad formula. Take my follow.

I really enjoyed this story!

That was really good! Short, sweet, exactly as long as it needed to be, and a good dose of heartwarming for good measure.

Thank you for sharing it with us!

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Yeah but he should’ve at least considered the possibility that the book belongs to Starlight.

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Awesome! I'm so glad you enjoyed this one too! Yeah, little slice of life one-shots are my favorite. Thank you so much for the follow. :twilightsmile:

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