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Chrysalis's time as a statue comes to an abrupt end as an alicorn wants company on this holy day. But a lot has changed. It is up to Twilight to tell her what has happened since.


I really liked the story by ALostCarolean and doing something very similar has been on my mind since i read it, this was more of a writing practice for me because I'm very out of practice, please go read the original here
https://www.fimfiction.net/story/508391/a-heartwarming-hearths-warming


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although this story is similar in concept to another story, the shortcomings that the first story had were at least smoothed out here. (Mentioning Spike, Chrysalis's slower transition to the bright side, mentioning the other two villains.) However, this story also does not look like a finished whole work.

And I would like to know where Celestia and Luna disappeared.

This is nooooot!

Heartwarming Hearth's Warming!

This is just a tribute!

Havn't read either story, I just felt compelled to reference that meme.

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I didn't go into depth about where Celestia and Luna went because for those two I didn't think where they went to was all that important really and I didn't really have a good idea for where to put them, the idea I liked best though would be that they're off creating another planet similar to this story https://www.fimfiction.net/story/160566/genesis

Nice, through Flurry seems to be missing.

AJ found a way to stick around when Pinkie didn't, colored me surprised ... :ajbemused:

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The reason for that is that I was thinking of this particular fic when I was thinking about Applejack https://www.fimfiction.net/story/371115/youre-here-forever

Well, that ended rather ominously

Where did you got that picture from? was it fan made

Kai

Kind of confused about the whole statue thing. Twi states in no unclear terms how horrible and immoral it is and then just kind of brushes the other two off like "well i cant let them run free, so, may as well just leave them like that, whatever." always weird when they are repulsed by the idea of ever killing anything for any reason but AM-esque nightmare prisons are just blithely glazed over.

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I thought I made it clear but I suppose I didn't really flesh it out because I wanted to just get the story to the part where Twilight begs Chrysalis to stay, but I was going for Twilight being ultimately ignorant about the actual scope of what being imprisoned in stone is like. And she wasn't focused on alleviating their suffering or their punishment, that was just her excuse to justify wanting Chrysalis around.

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IDW ISSUE 102 MLP SEASON 10.
https://derpibooru.org/images/2723399?q=spoiler%3Acomic102
Pretty much season 10 but in comic form. And its not fan made its official.

I understand that you decided to abandon the continuation of the story and deleted everything you had done?
It is sad :(

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It's not deleted really, I just unsubmitted it, the site still has it saved in it's entirety but I decided to remove it because I am no longer happy with it

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I just wanted to refresh my memory and accidentally found out that the story had disappeared from all libraries.

:/

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