Chrysalis's time as a statue comes to an abrupt end as an alicorn wants company on this holy day. But a lot has changed. It is up to Twilight to tell her what has happened since.
AN: This took a year for me too write... Correction, this took me half an hour to write over the course of the year. It's Not rushed and I am not the greatest of writers, I Just wanted it done after a whole year. it's 6am i have yet to sleep :') Hope you enjoy
AN2: I Am Planning on expanding this Story...
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BY ALOSTCAROLEAN
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Let's say Celestia and Luna went on interdimensional travel. Suppose Cadence refused Immortality after the death of her husband. I have no idea what happened to Flurry Heart, but don't dragons live for centuries? Where did Spike go?
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It also depends on the time scale, if it's centuries then it might be how big is Spike (or is he having a power nap) [or Ember for that matter, after all she does (or did) have the Dragon Sceptor]. If it's millennia, that leaves fewer (though the Apple family should still be around, though with less of a personal connection) to consider.
40,000 years.
Will there be a continuation ?
I feel like this should be part of a longer fic. It's decent on it'd own but it raises a lot of questions that really should be answered.
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I might Do something next year
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Sorry, I think that came off harsher than I meant it. While it could do with more content, what is there is good
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In the 41st millennium there is only war
"Not so long, oh ya also crab ponies rule the world, but they let me run the surface (which is really all of it)"
"Put me back in stone."
This was a great short read! A lovely slice of life story and i hope we get to see a few more slices in the future.
An excellent intro for a longer story, a bit short if you end up making this a one off. But won't Chrysalis eventually die? Or do you see her as immortal as Twilight? Oh well, definitely looking forward to more of this story.
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I'd like to think of her as immortal, yet i see where you are coming from.
WOW. The ending was anticlimactic - I wanted to know the answer to the amount of years! Awwwww!
Anyway, brilliant story, and a fantastic way of resurrecting Chrysalis in a new Equestria without its main ponies. Although, why were Cozy and Tirek not realized?
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In story reason, Cozy glow is a child who won't have much to live for in the future and therefore would be very depressed if released. Tirek is someone who tried to end friendship, takeover equestria and hurt twilight What would stop him then?
Real reason, Chryssy Best.
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Shhh! You are spoiling it!
I.....what? This story was way too short with an abrupt end. There is no way Chrysalis would just go "oh OK hug time".
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XD I am surprised you let her out since she has around the same crimes as the other two, but with her being more open to friendship and living longer, I understand. It might be lonely for her at first without her other crewmates (or rather, imposter-mates, if you get the joke.) The way you describe it, the real reason really is "Chryssi best," LOL. I love your profile pic by the way!
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Hmhm
There was no need to rush it
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I hope you consider an extended version of this story! I loved it right up until the end where it resolved waaay too quickly. If you were to write a story that had a few chapters the way you wrote the first 80% of this one, you'd REALLY have an incredible story!
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Thank you! I am planning on expanding this, no need to worry! But for now I want to take my time with Christmas.
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As opposed to the fate she's stuck in now?
I don't know what you mean by ending friendship, but didn't Chrysalis do those other things too?
It's an interesting premise that Twilight would free one of the Trio for companionship, but it needs a little reworking to be believable at least. Chrysalis's turn around doesn't make much sense in context.
The reason why Twilight springs her from confinement is that she "never gives up" (in this case) trying to conquer Equestria. And then the first then she does upon release, is to give up trying to conquer Equestria. Some much-needed character development is in order to get her from point A to point B.
All ya'll who worry that the story is dead.... it ain't, I am just focusing on my music. Which will be done by march.
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"The reason why Twilight springs her from confinement is that she "never gives up" (in this case) trying to conquer Equestria. And then the first then she does upon release, is to give up trying to conquer Equestria. Some much-needed character development is in order to get her from point A to point B."
I Agree, I kinda screwed up on that, It's supposed to be foreshadowing...
Tracking. I look forward to more of this.
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Alright Took a little longer... Cough, a month Cough But here we go!
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Take as much time as you need so the quality won't suffer. Had too many good stories been ruined for me by simply beeing too rushed.
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Thanks! The truth is, I've had time for a while, But my music is just too alluring. In the summer however, I've planned out three songs to release each month, so i should have actual reason to write, i have so many thoughts and ideas for this story ever since december, Yet i've never gotten to it. I will continue, and hopefully complete it, this summer!
Are Cozy Glow and Tirek also going to get released?