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Shining Moonlight

"Aim for the moon, if you fall, you'll land among the stars..."


Ten years after Twilight Sparkle became a princess Equestria is at the edge of a war. Many innocent ponies are killed in the most horrifying ways and the Elements and Princesses can't seem to find out who did it to the ponies. But when one of Equestrias most loyal and trusted turns against them and joins the dark side almost everyone loses hope.

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Chapters (5)
Comments ( 52 )

I'm pretty sure if towns are being burned daily, you're post the brink of war. I'll read this story later though

Very interesting. This story now has my attention. Watch out for typos and redundancy. I'll leave more specific information in the group. Overall, a solid start to what looks like an epic story.


Oooh! Are u going to make a chapter on how Twilight becomes corrupted?!

4791030 No sorry... In this story Twilight chose to join the dark side because of a special reason! You will find out in one of the next chapters! :pinkiehappy:

I am not sure the elements of harmony would work anymore for twi. I think?

4797071 Well you know what mate, that's a mystery to both of us! :rainbowlaugh:

4797071 What did you think about the story of Chrysalis and Sombra? It will continue in the next chapter for just a bit! :derpytongue2:

4800552 Thank you so much! It's really appreciated!:heart:

4803333 I really love I cant wait for more.

4930808 Thank you! What did you think was the best part? I'm going to make some changes in the part where the Prince Changeling Thorn is introduced so feel free to look back at that! :heart:

You should definitely go for the Chrysalis/Sombra story. I'm actually surprised that you're 14, because your writing is mature. So far, I'm very impressed with the story. As promised I'll have the next chapter review up shortly.

4970493 Why thank you! Again, these comments mean a lot to me! Also that's good to hear! Next chapter is going to be - in my opinion - amazingly scary! :trixieshiftright:

4981812 It will be a fun read then.:rainbowdetermined2:

4982888 I surely hope so! :twilightblush: I have been having problems with my writing lately so I hope that the next chapter will be worth the effort! :trixieshiftright: Anyways, I have to keep writing, I just got the amazing idea! :scootangel:

4970493 Although I will do my Sombra/Chrysalis story, I thought I'd write a story based on my OC character first! I will be writing a blog post to ask if any artists would be so kind to draw my OC since I cannot do so myself! :pinkiehappy: Have a nice day/evening!


That's freakin' Illuminati crap people!
Nice fic, you get a like and a fave, I can't wait for the next chapte :D

I was the one looking through your window. :pinkiehappy:..............................JK!

4993669 Ha ha thanks for the like and fave it means a lot m8! Why did I put Illuminati there? Because I think it sounds just awesome! :pinkiehappy:

4994210 You don't say! :twilightoops: *hides under desk just in case* "You'll never find me!" :derpytongue2:

I say it's 'bout time you got around to explaining the absence of Luna and the weakness of Celestia.
This chapter is really well done. More details here: http://www.fimfiction.net/group/204340/story-editing/thread/121744/hour-of-twilight.

5023339 Why we thanks thou for thou kindness!

Wait, you're alive!?!?!?

(I'm doing rp here and speaking directly to Luna)

5081125 Why of course my loyal subject! :trixieshiftright:

So, why am I only seeing you now? Where have you been all this time?

5101311 Why We have been traveling for a while :twilightsmile:

5105593 And while you were gone, the kingdom kind of . . . went to Hades.


Moonlight, art is ready! :D

Okay things just got weird.I though this was a Twilight and Sombra pairing story.


5457639 Ikr, weeeell I don't want to spoil for everyone so if you really want an explanation then give me a private message and I'll tell you!

5457796 :rainbowlaugh: I can't stop laughing haha!!

Comment posted by Bloodstone38 deleted Jan 4th, 2015

5466951 Were you expecting something different?

I'll be posting the chapter review sometime in the very near future, and yes, I am aware that it's about a week late. I've been away from the site for awhile taking a break over the holidays, but now I'm back and ready to get back to work.

5488273 I've been taking a break as well as I've been busy with school work and working on my other stories...

This story just got 20% more :rainbowdetermined2:

Now, I'm ready to start reviewing. Seriously, I need to get back in the saddle. :ajsleepy:

How can it be that I found this story just jet?! This is great!

I feel bad for Sombra.

This is a great story so far.

Noo I love Twibra they are meant for each other noo whyyyy :raritycry:

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