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MissytheAngle


Writer, Editor, and Shipper of Good Ships. Your typical cotton candy haired lesbian. Yes, I have pronouns. No, you can't have them.

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Trixie's birthday is coming up, and Starlight hasn't the faintest what to do. And Pinkie isn't even in town! So Starlight runs for help from her little dragon friend.

Now with a Chinese translation: here!

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 17 )

You did amazing, but that's natural for you my old friend, welcome back.

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Inferno, you're always too sweet, I swear. Thank you!

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Just being there for an old friend, it's what I do. I'm excited to see what else you'll make if you chose to stay and hopefully look over the movie (which I need to do myself).

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She's a pretty fantastic writer, amiright?

Missy, thank you so much for this. You didn't just write me a story. You used my favorite characters, made them in-character and found a way to apply it to me. That took more effort than a washing machine puts into a post-Taco Bell shitstain on plaid boxers.

You are one of a kind, cute (wink wink) and altogether a great friend. Keep being you.

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She's bucking amazing, I hope she never changes.

Maybe Spike could give Starlight the best birthday party ever!!!

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Oh my god, guys!!!! You're both the best! If only I could hug ya'll through the screen.

Famous, I'm so so so glad you liked it. I admit I was initially worried 'cause time was not on my side. Thankfully, it all worked out in the end, so yay! Happy your mom went through some shit day, HOORAY! :heart:

cute (wink wink) 

OH YOU!

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I can imagine that being, like, a part two to this story. It'd definitely fit into Starlight's clear complications when it comes to birthdays. I dunno. Maybe inspiration will spark one day and I'll come back to it.

“Absolutely. Once we invite the others and some other ponies in town to know, this

...this? This what? It cut off. You might want to fix that.


Found another one.

“You’ve been trying really hard to prove you’re better than you were in the past, and it’s show. I don’t think anyone hasn’t noticed by now. If they haven’t, then they really just aren’t try to,” he muttered, thinking about

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You'll be surprised by how often I make that same mistake. My writing process is very scattered (and so is my brain I swear to god), so more often than not I'll accidentally leave a paragraph unfinished, especially when I've got a deadline to meet when finishing something.

Thank you for pointing it out, though! All fixed!

I love this story! I love how you wrote Spike in this you did a really good job

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Thank you! Glad you enjoyed it! 😁

Ah that was nice.

Not a bad little story. I thought that having Spike come up with a few wise-cracks, only to think better of it and opt for a more serious and reassuring reply showed a certain depth to his character. In earlier seasons, one could argue he possessed less finesse, and then grew more considerate as he matured.

There were actually quite a few little bits in this story I found humorous too, by the way. :raritywink:

he made a pathetic attempt to hide the bag, turning away while shouting, “I don’t have a problem!”

:rainbowlaugh:

Spike and Starlight are on the case!”

“This isn’t a mystery or anything, Spike.”

“Yeah, but it sounds cool.”

Hehe. :pinkiehappy:

These cause sparks to come out when you open it… Well, okay, you can only use it once. I don’t have to pay for this, do I?” Spike briefly met the eyes of the exhausted shopkeep, who just buried his face in his hooves.

That made me laugh. :rainbowlaugh:

“Totally! You can’t worry too much about what could go wrong, because it’s pointless.” Spike snickered. “I live with Twilight, so trust me on that.”

Haha, true! :eeyup:

Now Starlight was smiling and it was genuine and wide, and she blinked back tears. “I guess you’re right.” After a pause, she surprised Spike with a hug. “Thank you, Spike. You’re the best.”

Aww! :pinkiesad2:

Thank you kindly for sharing! :twilightsmile:

Hey look, I finally read something you wrote!

I like it. It’s simple and sweet, and captures the characters quite well. I noticed that the prose sometimes felt mechanical and dry, but that’s pretty much the only flaw I can find. Nice job, you should write more :twilightsmile:

This was a really sweet and fun story, it honestly feels like it could've been an actual episode of the show! Great job! :twilightsmile:

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Aww, man, I love these compliments! 😭I always try my best to capture the not just the character's voices and actions, but the overall feeling of the show and their simple yet relatable conflicts. So thank you!

Add a romance tag and it'll be 100% flawless! Still upvoted though. Trixie x Starlight

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