Well, interessting stuff. Lets see where it is going.

I love Twilight's rant at the start. so right though... lol

Like to see how this plays out.

Honestly this is all I ever hoped for and more. Please continue this with more wacky scenarios, love your stuff!

Willing vore fusion via futa cock.

... God damn it, you just had to hit upon the extremely specific mother lode combination of all my fetishes. AND with Godlike, rightfully-smug Rainbow Dash to boot.

Down vote

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You do this a lot, bragging about your downhooves without providing feedback. Does it make you feel good?

I'm not trying to be snarky, I'm seriously interested in knowing.

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Yes .. Yes it does. Also. Oh please (eye rolls) you are not trying to be snarky you are failing to be snarky. (kiss kiss wink wink) .

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So, in other words, you're just being a jerk for the sake of it? There really isn't a single positive thing that comes from this behavior.

God is dead. God remains dead. And we have killed him. How shall we comfort ourselves, the murderers of all murderers? What was holiest and mightiest of all that the world has yet owned has bled to death under our knives: who will wipe this blood off us? What water is there for us to clean ourselves? What festivals of atonement, what sacred games shall we have to invent? Is not the greatness of this deed too great for us? Must we ourselves not become gods simply to appear worthy of it?

9288121
Do what now? How can you say that??? It make fanbois go nuts. So that is a net positive in my book.

9288146
Over dramatic much?

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Hello there, pot.

hark what be this? another story that is destined to never be finished? seems rather likely.

9288390
Oh hello back kettle.

9293929
Perhaps it would be wiser for you to review your comment, and whose comment you referenced, before you cast shade on one merely highlighting your very own flaws. In addition, you should take to heart the phrase, "judge not, lest ye be judged yourself."

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Blow me.

9294023
Lonely?

9288146
You're scaring me Cyne. This isn't even remotely passable, let alone good.

9296585
shitposting on uniquely bad story premises was an old pasttime of mine. Copypasting from Nietchze's The Gay Science is just an evolution of this

also: lmao I love when people don't get it and htink I made it up, so that's a plus

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It's not a bad story premise at least for a smut story. Just poorly executed.
I was just nonplussed and couldn't parse it.

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Horny .

So where the new chapter?

nice work.

I like it. Maybe mention more stuff Twilight has accomplished that's not just fetish fuel? It'd be a waste not to with the world building you've already done.

I can’t wait for the next couple of chapters, I really want to see what happens next!

Great story. More please

I give up. There is no way to top this. It’s over.

Update?

nooooooooooo.

RIP this story.. i don't even remember what it was about but i'm sure it was a good story.. too bad it'll never be finished