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Well, interessting stuff. Lets see where it is going.

I love Twilight's rant at the start. so right though... lol

Like to see how this plays out.

I suggest adding a disclaimer to the description:


Because if you don't accept the porn logic, the way some of these characters act is unusual and disturbing. Pretty great with porn logic though.

Honestly this is all I ever hoped for and more. Please continue this with more wacky scenarios, love your stuff!

Hell yeah screw Blueblood

lol this is a lot funnier than I expected

beneath her dark dress. Anyway, I called them here

beneath her dark dress. "Anyway, I called them here

the occasional gallon or precum

of precum

Willing vore fusion via futa cock.

... God damn it, you just had to hit upon the extremely specific mother lode combination of all my fetishes. AND with Godlike, rightfully-smug Rainbow Dash to boot.

I will give this a read and also plz accept my friend request on discord MassDriver. I've been waiting on that for awhile now. I will tell you if this story is good or not in my next comment.

You do this a lot, bragging about your downhooves without providing feedback. Does it make you feel good? :trixieshiftright:

I'm not trying to be snarky, I'm seriously interested in knowing.

It's not good... It was fucking fantastic! I mean wow... from chapter 1 to this chapter... keep up the good work on this story. I want to see this story through to it's end. You got an upvote from me.

Yes .. Yes it does. Also. Oh please (eye rolls) you are not trying to be snarky you are failing to be snarky. (kiss kiss wink wink) . :twilightsmile:

She breathed in, puffing up her chest. (She didn’t have the most impressive chest - even after becoming an alicorn, she just had a pair of B-cups - but she presented it proudly.) “So I’ve decided I’m going to be in charge from now on.”

...not that there is anything wrong with a B cup.

So, in other words, you're just being a jerk for the sake of it? There really isn't a single positive thing that comes from this behavior.

God is dead. God remains dead. And we have killed him. How shall we comfort ourselves, the murderers of all murderers? What was holiest and mightiest of all that the world has yet owned has bled to death under our knives: who will wipe this blood off us? What water is there for us to clean ourselves? What festivals of atonement, what sacred games shall we have to invent? Is not the greatness of this deed too great for us? Must we ourselves not become gods simply to appear worthy of it?

Do what now? How can you say that??? It make fanbois go nuts. So that is a net positive in my book. :rainbowkiss:

“Yeah, I’m not that subtle about it,” laughed Twilight. “I didn’t go in a very subtle direction with my tits, either. What can I say? It feels good to big!”

Feels good to be big?

hark what be this? another story that is destined to never be finished? seems rather likely.:moustache:

Perhaps it would be wiser for you to review your comment, and whose comment you referenced, before you cast shade on one merely highlighting your very own flaws. In addition, you should take to heart the phrase, "judge not, lest ye be judged yourself."

As usual with MassDriver, I'm left disappointing and wanting.
The usual poor writing and absolute cringe descriptions and dialogue leaving me wanting to claw my own eyes out.

You're scaring me Cyne. This isn't even remotely passable, let alone good.

shitposting on uniquely bad story premises was an old pasttime of mine. Copypasting from Nietchze's The Gay Science is just an evolution of this

also: lmao I love when people don't get it and htink I made it up, so that's a plus

It's not a bad story premise at least for a smut story. Just poorly executed.
I was just nonplussed and couldn't parse it.

Okay I got to say this story is good so far, but still I don't see any reason why Celestia and Luna can't retake their titles as Princesses, after all they can UNDO everything Twilight did if they have a time travel spell handy so it's possible if they find something they don't like that Twilight did then they will just up and use the spell.

So where the new chapter?

I like it. Maybe mention more stuff Twilight has accomplished that's not just fetish fuel? It'd be a waste not to with the world building you've already done.

I can’t wait for the next couple of chapters, I really want to see what happens next!

don't you mean blueballs?

Great story. More please

yeah... i caught that one too...

I give up. There is no way to top this. It’s over.


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