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The Buck It Bros


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Ever since she was a young filly Octavia had everything planned for her by her parents. What schools she would go to, what instrument she would play, what career she would have after school. Everything went according to plan. That was until Octavia moved away to Ponyville. However, Octavia's parents have one more plan and that is to marry off Octavia. Octavia will not be a part of that plan and with the help of Vinyl Scratch and a few other friends they create a plan to stop the arranged marriage and free Octavia from her parent's hold.

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Comments ( 27 )

*Reads the letter*
That's it, that is a new level of snobbery in the Canterlot Nobles, can't ignore it now. They are getting the frying pan!

I will admit that this is one the few ships I support and this story has a lot of potential. You don’t often see duo writers. You get the collabs every now and then, but no dedicated partnerships. You’ve pulled it off well. I expect great things.

Here's your plan Octavia, ignore them, just don't show up. I mean what are they going to do about it right? They can't force you to do shit, just act like the whole thing doesn't matter and worse case scenario your horrible parents get pissy about it but do nothing. It's like their word is law.

Why do I think Vinyl’s plan is far too complicated? I see she is the adventurousness one in the relationship. Hopefully they cause enough chaos during the date that it scares off the guy.

looks like a fun read so far

hopefully the mares can convince the nobles to back off and either approve of their daughter's choice in lover, or lose her forever

9099492
Thank you for reading. I hope you enjoy the story as it continues to unfold. Your comment was awesome.

9099538
Thank you for reading the story. I hope that the coming chapters meet and exceed your expectations. This first chapter was so much fun to work on. We are jut writing it for the fun of it. I am just happy that others are enjoying it as much as we are.

9099550
That plan would save her a lot of time indeed. It just wouldn't be as fun for Vinyl. Thank you for reading. :pinkiehappy:

9099681
Thank you for commenting and reading the story so far. I do hope that you find the plan and what happens because of it enjoyable.

9099806
Thank you for reading and commenting. I hope you enjoy what is to come.

9100077
Thank you for reading and commenting. Only time can tell. I hope you enjoy the story as I continue to post. :twilightsmile:

9100195
Ah yes the classic "Let's screw over the main character as much a possible for own amusement!" Schtick, how delightfully diabolical!

Wait, an arranged marriage? "According To Plan"? ... Did you, by any chance, just watch this?

If so, I'm favoriting this story right now, cause you RULE!

Some slight critiques... The story is unfolding a little fast here. Also, you may want to go back and make sure your punctuation is correct, as I can see numerous places where instead of '," said', you have ." Said. Which is not the correct way to do quotes. That said, I love your dialogue. I feel like you could use a bit of cleaning up on your puctuation and such, as well as some of the descriptions.

Understand, I say this to make sure it is not jarring for your readers. It makes it so much more readable. You have an interesting concept, but there are some things you can do to make things work better. I can see some definite potential in this. Some good polishing can definitely bring it out.

9100408
Actually the worse possible outcome involves abduction and indoctrination, but I doubt the story is going to get that dark.

9100202
oh I plan to, hopefully some "unforeseen accidents" don't happen

9101137
Pfft, please, don't worry yourself with such implausible nonsense, I'm positive all will go according to plan!

9100675
Thank you for the comment is made me laugh. I actually listened to that song a lot last Halloween. I haven't watched it recently though. However, I could see how Octavia's parents might sing the parts sung by Victor's parents. I hope you enjoy the story as things unfold. :rainbowlaugh:

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Thank you for the comment and reading. I just started writing fan fiction again after having not done so for a long time. I might have over looked some things in my reread. There are also two people working on this story so I will make sure that my partner and I try to caught more of those mistakes. Thank you for pointing it out. I hope you enjoyed the first chapter. :twilightsmile:

9101137
Well this is a comedy, romance story. I hadn't even thought of that.

Well now this looks like it will be a wild and fun ride! <3

9101490
I hope that you enjoy what is to come. Thank you for reading chapter one.

9102405
You hold up your end of the bargain by creating more enjoyable chapters, and I'll hold up my end of the bargain by shoving more compliments at your face, to encourage production of more good content! =P

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