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Set after the Legacy story line. A crew of Mandalorian commandos make a blind jump through hyper space after flying into an ambush and end up crash landing in an uncharted star system. Unfortunately for them and the races that call this star system home, the Deathwatch are close behind and looking to finish the job.
Inspired after playing a lot of Star Wars Sagas and watching way too much Friendship is Magic.
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Oh sweet Celestia dis is good.
Oh my. It seems a good many spelling and grammar errors were missed in the transfer. Ah well! Back to work!
There really should be a comma in here. I recommend just before "especially."
That C in copilot really shouldn't be capitalized.
The M in Mando'a should be capitalized since its a proper noun (the name of a language).
Unless you're going for some sort of stylistic or comedic thing having two of the same word in a sentence is generally considered unseemly. In this case it's "newest." If you're having trouble finding a replacement Thesaurus.com is a great place to dig one up.
That should be Ardent-class fast frigate. Ship names are always italicized. You also stopped italicizing The Cheating Whore's name after it was first mentioned. That's a no-no.
I'm assuming you meant "wiped" instead of "whipped" here?
Nickpicky? Perhaps, from a certain point of view, but I'm not about to let you start your FIMFiction run off with grammar errors.
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Naw vod, I'd be surprised if you let that stuff slip by, I'll go make the changes, thanks for spotting them.
That symbol was all i needed to see to give you a thumb.
Now ill read to see if it gets a fave too! 
Glad to finally see this here! Sup' Doc
New chapter for Xenophobia by the way. I await your opinion with bated breath
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Yeah, since I'm still working on other stuff I figured now was as good a time as any. So far it's been well received.
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Vor entye ner burc'ya! Looking forward to hearing what you think about it.
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S'what you get for not telling me before you transfer things. >( I'da gone through and made it look nice.
Aww hell yeah!!!!!!!!
Very nice star wars crossover so far!
Post some moar SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOON!!!!
Nice, you've carried over from Fanfiction.
Now... When is that second story coming along? I'm rather curious.
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Soon, soon.
Great ending there!
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Please send me that picture
I need it as my skype profile now
Wait a second... Isn't the entire story up on fanfic.net? Or is this a revised edition?
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You're right on both accounts actually. The whole story is up on Fanfiction but some of my friends talked me into moving it here in order to expand my number of readers. The first couple of chapters have been revised as well to help with dialogue for the most part.
This story never ceases to make me laugh. A
for you good sir. *tips wine glass*
*Lunian* How did you get that glass?
*me* Pinkie taught me how to do it.
This reminds of just why I love the Star Wars universe.
How is this not getting any comments? I am outraged!
Come to think of it, I'm still waiting on that update in FanFiction.
Mind tricks the best way to get someone to sleep
Poor Fluttershy. Learning the hard way that beskar (Or I'm assuming Arkannas' armor is made with beskar anyway.) doesn't make for a good pillow. I gotta say, you have a really good balance going in your story, man. A lot of action and violence followed down time that doesn't feel slow and is full of d'awws and lulz. Well done.
Oh by the way on the subject of pillows, Flutterpillow is best pillow.
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. Funny thing is, I didn't intend it when I first started writing this, but when it started cropping up I let it happen.
Arkanna hasn't earned his beskar yet, but his gear'll soak a blaster bolt like a champ, just won't hold up to a lightsaber. But I'll be the first to admit, I freaking love the idea of Fluttershy and Arkanna, something so adorable about the shy quiet girl and the young fresh faced warrior
>finally added to FimFiction
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Eeeyup, decided to make the move while I wait for my pre-reader to stop dragging his feet and finally give me a hand with the next project.
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It's the opposite for me. For both of my stories, the audience is much larger here (especially my anti-TCB one, as it's not a crossover and the main page goes super fast) and remembering to update/add chapters is an afterthought that I don't get around to weeks after posting here.
Can't wait for more! Fluttershy x Arkanna ftw!
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I think you'll be very pleased with the next couple of chapters then.
1183713 Sweet!
Combat skirt? Don't you mean a kama or belt-spat?
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I absolutely mean a kama, but not everyone knows what that is so I just simplified it.
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Oh ok
I'm really glad that you're doing a great job with this.
I haven't felt this way ever since I read Karen Traviss's (now-tainted) Republic Commando series.
Hopefully you'll add in some more allusions to Mando'a and Mando'ade culture
Super excited!!!
I really got to find more time to read this.
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Here's hoping I don't disappoint you.
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Hah, yeah you do.
I had wondered about that. But awesome story is awesome.
So much d'aww in that last little bit.
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Yes,Flutter pillow is best pillow.
Where does the Mando' come from?
Oh yeah! Read this on FanFiction. Arkanna x Fluttershy
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WooHoo! Moremoremoremoremoremore!
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Do you mean the language or the people?
So much aweseome....
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Heh, glad you enjoyed it, let's see if we can keep this train moving shall we.
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Arkanna x Fluttershy my OTP.