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Time changes everything. Old friends leave us and new ones come into our lives. Now that Equestria and the other nations have been exposed to the galaxy at large, things are changing. Here are a few stories of how.

The following is a collection of one shots and short stories to bridge the gap between "Of War and Friendship" and the next big adventure as well as an outlet for random story ideas.

Chapters (9)
Comments ( 85 )

Glad to see you finally got these up on here.

I love it! Faved, tracking and thumbed up.

Speaks volumes for tenacity don't it?

That's the way to be remembered. Strong drinks, good friends and no tears.

Force sensitive Scootaloo huh? I'm okay with that. :moustache:

Raises the question of how many other non-unicorn ponies are force sensitive. :eeyup:

I'm interested to see what happens with these four in your next story. :raritywink:

You know, having read all of these chapters on FF.net already, it's really hard for me to think of something to comment on. I think I may have found something though.

Are these chapters going to be revised for presentation here like the chapters of your previous story were? I ask because of the . . . lackluster quality of one of the chapters. You know the one.

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If we're thinking of the same story, I think I might just drop that one. It really didn't give a lot to the story.

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It might actually take things away. Given that certain point from that certain chapter that is important to the story, showing ponies fighting in the war would be counterproductive. If you're still considering that "Tales of Ba Sing Sae" chapter, showing ponies being against the war (possibly with a recruiter character) would actually be productive.

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Hmmm, that might work.

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Quite. Playing up Luna's eagerness to go to war would also be a good way to draw a contrast between her and the rest of Equestria's population. Might want to touch on how people in other nations are reacting to Mandalorian recruiters as well.

Man! Loved this chapter!
Nice shout out to 'Dune'.
Aww Sweetie Belle and Casus

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YES, someone finally got the Dune nod!

I am thoroughly enjoying these side stories. The whole Casus and Sweetie thing made me smile, and, honestly, I'm glad the Ugnaught won here. It takes the story on an altogether more interesting--nearly cliche-free--route that really fleshes out Casus's character. Shmexy.

I await the next installment with bated breath.
Also, this is relevant:
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I have to admit that I really like writing these little adventures, I especially like how things are evolving with Casus and the girls. It's very tempting to turn this into something just about them. Might have to make a whole other side story to cover them and their adventures.

That aside, your pic didn't load.

1834239 Well, that's unfortunate...
Nonetheless, Merry Apocalypse to you good sir. May all your last wishes come true :rainbowkiss:

Least hes doin somin productive while stuck in equestria.

Go Team Hammer!

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HAH, sweet, you found the side stories.

Knight Scootaloo, hell yeah :scootangel:

So Scoots is a squire now? cool, looking forward to more chapters.

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You leave a lot of comments, I like you.

have any plans for the sequel yet?

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Funny you should ask. I had an idea for yet another short that kind of escalated into its own story. Aside from that, I can't stop coming up with ideas for the actual sequel. I honestly both love and hate how what started out as a story I wrote on a dare has turned into a full blown hobby of mine.

I like what you are doing with Sweetie and Casus :pinkiehappy:, and I would like to see a Fluttershy and Arkanna short. btw I WANT MOAR MACKERS!!!! :flutterrage:

Mackers Mackers Mackers Mackers Mackers!!! :pinkiecrazy:

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Okay, I get the feeling that you guys want me to do a Mackers story. :twilightblush:

i would personally like to see a lot more from these characters...particularly as both Hammer and Anvil seem to be 'blank flanks', their eventual cutie marks would be interesting if nothing else, and theres a distinct flavour of good plot hooks from this start...though i get the impression that at lest a few of them were in fact borrowed from the SPARTAN II program of the Halo-verse. Hammers attitude is much like that of John when he was first 'recruited', an attitude that he kept for most of his life, long enough to become known as the Last SPARTAN...the Master Chief....

2112670 he isn' the last SPARTAN he is amongst the last of the S-IIs there are another five I think

Dammit! I need that defibulator now!!!! :heart: So awesome! Made my night!

That was beautiful :raritystarry:. So I shall give you 10 out of five moustaches :moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache:

If Arkanna dies somehow...


I will find you


and I will SKIN YOU.


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Hugs and kisses :heart: keep up the good work!

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Hmmmmmmmm, I get the distinct feeling that you might be a fan of this pairing.

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Yeah, I'll admit, I had a bit too much fun with that chapter. :yay:

Nice chapter. It's interesting to see that Spitfire decided to transfer to the Neo-Protectors instead of staying with the Wonderbolts. Did Soarin' transfer, as well? Perhaps Spitfire and Dash (and Soarin' if he went) could use their Mando combat training to train the Royal Guard and a new version of the Wonderbolts that are more combat-oriented than ceremonial.

I love the way this chapter was done. I think we need more of these.

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Here's a better question, did Soarin live through the sacking of Canterlot?

Now what trouble will our intrepid heroes get into with Dash joining the less-than cautious Skirata? Mayhaps we'll find out next time.

2456512 if i had to make a guess...i would say that the three surviving Wonderbolts were Spitfire, Sorin, and a mare names Fleetfoot. Sorin due to the fact that his skill is second only to Spitfire which is y he was her second in command on the Wonderbolts. Fleetfoot is a smaller bodied mare, making her less of a target, and she lives up to her name being one of the fastest team members.

2451431 actually, i wouldnt call the Wonderbolts a ceremonial unit, as they r trained in aerial combat, much the way the Blue Angels squad of the US Air Force is a fully trained combat unit that also puts on quite a few air shows for publicitys sake. this also fits in with an old military tactic, old, but still good and still used today. its called Shock and Awe; basically, wow ur foes so much that they want nothing to do with the battle. now the Royal Guard, yes, they likely r a largely ceremonial force, but they r also the primary military force of Equestria, they just arnt used to advanced tech weaponry, nor r they trained to fight it.

2472211 I understand your point, but your writing is extremely difficult to read.

2476364 when im commenting i generally revert to texttalk, bad habit, but it does save quite a bit of time...

2456512 He was probably eating pie when they attacked. Bad timing.

Bucking awesome chapter :rainbowdetermined2:

2349276 Fuck you fuck you fuck you fuck yoU FUCK YOU FUCK YOU FUCK YOU FUCK YOU FUCK YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

2510191 Pinkie: Ooohh! What kind?! Apple? Pumpkin? Cheesecake? Boston Cream? ...Apricot-Mango? Ooh! Ooh ooh ooh!! I know I know!! ...PIE FLAVOR!!!!:pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

Rom: Damnit Pinks. No more ASDF vids for you.:eeyup::eeyup:

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