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All she had was this one last chance. After a long succession of accidents and failures, rookie guardsmare Amber Shine is given one final task that her commanding officer hopes won't lead to her finally being discharged. All she had to do was work the night shift protecting the newest Alicorn Princess's precious library, a mission that anypony could do. But an attempted foalnapping followed by an accidental run in with a magical mirror changes all that. Now, Private Amber Shine finds herself stranded in a strange, violent place in the throes war and caught between the tenacious rebels of a shattered country and the powerful empire that conquered them. With the help of a small band of mercenaries, she fights to survive and maybe one day go home.

The story itself is a sort of Elseworlds tale for Amber Shine and is in no other way connected to the story Dependable Blades.

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Chapters (5)
Comments ( 10 )

*Smiles deviously*
Did I see not only a Fallout 3 refrence, but also an Oblivion refrence?
You, my friend, officially have a good sense for games (unless I am mistaken of course), and I will be eagerly looking forward to your next update.

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I've been known to game a video from time to time.

Fallout and Oblivion I notice make there way into a lot of fic's. Which is a good thing. Fallout is awesome.

Yes, more batpony. There is a serious lack of batpony/adventure based stories. This looks promising, so far Delray. I'm looking forward too more.

so can she move clouds?

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I'm gonna assume she can do whatever her Pegasus cousins can do.

6055534 cool that be useful and surprise skill for the group to learn about~

Thanks for the update ! :twilightsmile:

This so far is great you really know how to tell a story! Some very minor spelling errors but overall nothing bad. I very much am looking forward to more. Cheers! :twilightsmile:

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