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Fenrir928


Aug
3rd
2013

A question to all of you. · 8:28pm Aug 3rd, 2013

I have been tossing the idea of moving my first, and right now only, posted clop story over from Fanfiction.net to here. It was written somewhat as a challenge from friend, to write a clopfic from Friendship for a Soldier. It is not canon, and is mostly just wish fulfillment or ideas that people put in my head. The idea behind it was just pure fun, not to be taken entirely seriously. It was put on hiatus while I finished the original story, but I will (hopefully soon) begin working on it again,

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Where are your stores at, I can't find them enywere.

I just found this story, and I just fell in love with it, I really hope I get to finish it.
Please, just this once I would like to see the end of someones wonderfull story.
Weather it ends on a hiatus or not I desperately want to finish this story!

1040278 Alright here you go! I will copy paste it at the bottom, don't call it a review but call it an opinion. Go to my profile tho and scroll down to my favorite fanfics, and you will see the 5 fics sitting there with you story in one of the spots, please read it so you can see how much I like your story.



My profile (scroll down through all the boxes filled with stories, look at the third one down)

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Thank you very much, comments like that are something that any and every writer lives for. And as to your question, it's because the are not the Marines that we know. A "Marine" is a soldier that is trained to fight on land or sea, or in this case, space. In the universe Jaze is from, basically all the world's nations were destroyed, and much of the culture was lost in the intervening years. The word itself took on slightly new meaning when humanity took to space, though for the most part it is the same. So, in short, the SSM has little to no relation with the American Marine Corps, other than they are both a class of soldier classified as "Marine".

I hope that helps a bit.

I absolutely loved your story and I hate to admit it but some of the parts had me in tears. I also found a couple parts to be a bit gory for my taste(I hate seeing innocent creatures gunned down) but such is war. I was surprised by Trixie being the object of the soldiers affection but it worked out well. Completely changed my view of her. Overall It was one of the best stories I have read so far and I eagerly await the sequel. I am a bit curious though, why did you change the marines uniform and motto? Being a former marine that kind of thing tends to stick out to me.

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Aug
3rd
2013

A question to all of you. · 8:28pm Aug 3rd, 2013

I have been tossing the idea of moving my first, and right now only, posted clop story over from Fanfiction.net to here. It was written somewhat as a challenge from friend, to write a clopfic from Friendship for a Soldier. It is not canon, and is mostly just wish fulfillment or ideas that people put in my head. The idea behind it was just pure fun, not to be taken entirely seriously. It was put on hiatus while I finished the original story, but I will (hopefully soon) begin working on it again,

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