Takes Two To Fluttershy

MWhen Rainbow Butts In
MLP: FiM
Slice of Life
Porn
Rainbow wants to try some of Twilight's magic out. The unexpected results astound her, and her three male Wonderbolt teammates.
Fetish
Sex
Profanity
Anthro
Twilight
Rainbow Dash
Soarin
Wonderbolts
Steel Quill · 14k words · 269 21 · 18k views

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Swifter

Swifter #1 · May 10th, 2018 · 1 · 1 ·

Good stuff as always!

Steel Quill

Steel Quill #2 · May 10th, 2018 · 1 · 1 ·

8916709 Thank you very much!

Speculore

Speculore #3 · May 10th, 2018 · 1 · 1 ·

Do you plan to make a story like this for each member of the Mane Six?

ShadowLDrago

ShadowLDrago #4 · May 10th, 2018 · 1 · 1 ·

“...mercy?”

She has none.

Steel Quill

Steel Quill #5 · May 10th, 2018 · 2 · 1 ·

8917523 None at all whatsoever!
8917451 Right now, I don’t have plans for the rest. But plans can always change.

Speculore

Speculore #6 · May 10th, 2018 · 1 · 1 ·

8917549
Well I hope you do. I'm really enjoying them.

Zheroxzone

Zheroxzone #7 · May 11th, 2018 · 1 · 1 ·

Steel, like holy shit man! you certainly stepped up your game with this one. This was superb compaired to the first one, solid 10 in my book. Although theres just this tiny thing i dont think Rainbow was needed to be put in this, it would've been enough to just have Twi jacking off to the show, guess im just tired of people always trying to do the lesbian acts with them but thats just me. Again very solid story had a lot of fun with it, and if there's gonna be a 3rd installment ill be here waiting.

Steel Quill

Steel Quill #8 · May 11th, 2018 · 1 · 1 ·

8917943 Thank you very much! You’re too kind as for that small part, I included it mainly as a sort of running gag/joke from the previous story that I couldn’t resist adding in. It may not really contribute to the story, but it’s just there more for giggles.

Thank you for reading!

Greenhorn

Greenhorn #9 · May 11th, 2018 · 3 · 1 ·

Who is gonna Take Three? Seriously, Twilight is going to steal Cadance's job at this rate.

blaa6

blaa6 #10 · May 11th, 2018 · 8 · 1 ·

I’d love one with Dash. Hell, I could provide a guy she can have fun with. Heck, she could be punished with a curvy body with huge tits and she learns to love them.

The dragon hunter

The dragon hunter #11 · May 13th, 2018 · 3 · 1 ·

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That was insanely hot

“However, some knowledge is kept private from the likes of you, from friend and foe alike. In this case, a particular cycle of time lasting the span of a week, belonging to one mutual friend of ours. I’ll give you a hint: She’s yellow, very shy, loves long walks in the animal sanctuary, and is overly fond of a nefarious rabbit of hers.”

a particular cycle of time lasting the span of a week

a week

Wait. Does it mean she'll spent seven days having naughty threesome sex?
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“...mercy?”

I love how the relationship between those two has evolved since the last story. Next time: Twilight turns into Dusk Shine to give Rainbow the roll in the hay of her life

Speaking of hay, any hope to see Applejack in a future sequel?

Steel Quill

Steel Quill #12 · May 13th, 2018 · 3 · 2 ·

8921596 I cant say anything in definite terms right now, if only because I’ve not gone back to brainstorming just yet. But she’s on the table, same as the rest.

The oracle

The oracle #13 · May 13th, 2018 · 4 · 2 ·

I request a sequel where Twilight becomes a stallion and with that nerdy guy from first one, wrecks rainbow.

Omnishifter

Omnishifter #14 · May 14th, 2018 · 3 · ·

At first, when I read the whole "Fluttershy needs more confidence and Twilight gives her an incentive thing as a solution" part in the beginning, I was thinking "This is probably gonna just have that and then jump straight to the sex, derailing the craziness of Twilight's method in the process, and my hopes we would see some action between Rainbow Dash and Twilight will be unresolved, I'll express my disappointment, leave a downvote and get out..."

Now... I sincerely apologize for doubting you Steel Quill! The addition of accidental chaos to this suitably vague yet still sufficiently believable, Discord's inclusion was funny and solidly structured, and the parts with Fluttershy were already hot enough to turn me mostly around even before the part with Twilight and Rainbow (that was a delicious surprise, I didn't even register it until I fully read it!)... but the second part of their fucking was so damned sexy I just had to 'express it' right then and there! (and that is not typical for me...)

That all together, I had to leave this comment, as well as declare I will now move the previous story, and place this one, in my Extraordinary folder rather than Pleasure folder, in other words... step up!

Side note:

“I need more. One of you is going inside of me. Right. Now.” Fluttershy instructed, lowering a hand to drift down to her soaked pussy, getting the attention of both stallions for a moment before they looked to each other.

It was at that moment that I realized... Fluttershy's voice, with a firmer tone, is really sexy!

Steel Quill

Steel Quill #15 · May 14th, 2018 · · ·

8925088 Thank you so much for the kind words! I'm glad the story exceeded expectations.

Yggra21

Yggra21 #16 · Jun 13th, 2018 · · ·

This was just as good as the first one. And again you’ve left me wanting to know what happens to Rainbow. Hope to see a third piece in the future.

marinus18

marinus18 #17 · Jul 29th, 2018 · · ·

Listening, Fluttershy kept quiet as she thought of an appropriate response to give. The old her would’ve just offered a consoling pat on the back, and let it be from there. But she wanted to be more present, more physical. The urge was stronger now so close to Nest than if she were apart from him. Before she could stop herself

I would think Fluttershy would also genuinely care and be interested in what he is saying.

Steel Quill

Steel Quill #18 · Nov 2nd, 2018 · 2 · ·

9268082 Fluttershy was not drugged, no. Nor was any part of this story non-consensual. She was using the treats as a psychology trick, to work on her confidence. She neglected to remember her heat coming up. As a result, the small bits of chaos magic that were leftover from Twilight simply made her heat more intense, by extension, making her even more forward/confident.

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