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Steel Quill

A pony with too much time on his hooves and too much plot to work with, in more ways than one. Also on FA!


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Fuck yeah, our big booty bitch babe is back!

9177875 And she has company! :raritywink:

Oooo, YES, you made a sequel. Can't wait to read it

My god, my pants exploded when I saw this.

Do be careful of burns! Fiery pants can be dangerous, I hear.

Nice! I've been looking forward to a sequel with Vinyl ever since the first story and it didn't disappoint.

There was quite a lot of demand, more than I expected, and inspiration struck at the right time! :twilightsmile: Do let me know what you think when you finish reading it!

I was hoping you'd get back to this as a threesome. Gorgeous, have an up.

The only part I don't like about this is the "completed" tag. I'd love to see more of these two, especially with Octavia teaching him how to date older women.

Especially things like her taking him out clothes shopping and fucking in a change room stall. Or they are out and about and someone mistakes Octavia as his mom and they roleplay that out. Or Vinyl just gets them destroyed on some trippy shit she has, and they have magic drug sex.

Also butt stuff. Any story is enhanced with anal.

Look the main part is you got two very enjoyable characters in a great relationship AND I WANT MORE

Wonder if you'll make a 3rd to turn this into a trilogy.
I certainly would enjoy one last look at these two and their relationship.

9178916 I mean, the “completed” tag is really only used when I’ve completed the work on that particular story piece. The full story though, that may not necessarily be complete, depending on inspiration :raritywink:

9178955 There is a possibility, depending on everyone’s response/interest. We shall see!


nuff said lol

We join our film crew in the wild, where two cougars compete to claim the freshest meat. Were we all so lucky.

Fuck... wow... that was... this knocks the previous fic out of the park, and that was was damn god in its own right!

I'm suddenly regretting using that Shakespear quote last time.

I have immortal longings in me to read this again. Unfortunately, I have just read it - which means that my interest is temporarily gone for, uh, reasons - and it's 3 in the morning.

Nonetheless, I shall return to this one much like I returnd to the previous one many times.

Also, if you were to make another sequel on this, I wouldn't mind at all. Just saying. I also would be completely okay with you squeezing Vinyl in there. Not every encounter has to be a threesome, but I would be fine if this wasn't a one time thing. Please?

9179910 Thank you so much for the kind words! :twilightsmile: was there anything particular that stood out for you? I always love hearing any sort of detail or bit that really sold it for my readers

9179939 You're welcome! Thank you for the story!

I'm finding it hard to find anything that really stood out to me. It all just came together as one (long but great) experience.

I guess I liked how Copper and Octavia's relationship developed, and Vinyl was a great addition - I loved her character, the little minx - and I liked how the fic built up to the sex scene, always keeping it a little hot. Or was that just me?

I don't know. It's too late for this, and I haven't read the story enough to really get some of the finer details of it.

Aww, yiss! This was a scorcher (every way that can be read!) for sure, quill! My one longing, for a story in the future, is to have Copper(tone) (tanning)Spray stud for both of these two cougars, and give them a present that'll last a lifetime, if you know what I mean!

Hmm...can't say I've put thought to that scenario for them yet. That's not to say its impossible, but I'm not sure if they'd jump to that point by the next story. But, who knows? Time skips can solve almost anything these days.

Oh, don't rush things! Perhaps, by the fifth story with these three, the characters would be at such a point in their relationship with each other, that coming up with the little details of how it all plays out would practically write itself. I believe in you, as a writer, and would love to see where this all goes for a long while!

I vote for a third installment, and to continue after that, too, if there's inspiration left in your body for it.

Thank you for writing this sequel, though. I was really excited when I saw it in my feed. :D

It was really, really good! I like how Vinyl and Octavia both have their own unique personalities, but still get along fine with each other. Everyone feels like a real, interesting person. Of course, the prose itself is also very good and and enjoyable (and hot) to read.

Well, I'll certainly keep the idea in mind! I can already think of a few ideas for scenes of future stories. There's plenty of possibility.


Especially things like her taking him out clothes shopping and fucking in a change room stall. Or they are out and about and someone mistakes Octavia as his mom and they roleplay that out.

Lewd Lovely ideas

This is all i can say about this:

A third installment! With Octavia and Vinyl now pregnant!

Id love to see this story continue. Its written fantastically and the sex is steamy. Id like to see copper be more dominant and flip it that way and more public place scenes, but its your story, all up to you. Keep it up!!

That would be so fucking hot. :rainbowkiss:

I've only just discovered these two, but all I have to say is can't wait for a possible third one.

“Pleading the fifth. Pleading it and keeping the fifth.”


How is it you managed to top the original? Fantastic work. Would love to see a third.

Number 3 is in the works! :raritywink:

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