Ember's Punishment

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Wild Zontars

Wild Zontars #1 · Mar 24th, 2018 · 1 · ·

Oh shit, I know where the cover art came from...

...yep, that went exactly where it was going.

Grungar3x7

Grungar3x7 #2 · Mar 24th, 2018 · 1 · ·

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Whitekitten commision? Yep, those are a thing, certainly.

Still marked this for later reading, though.

Infamous Paradox

Infamous Paradox #3 · Mar 24th, 2018 · · ·

Wow, that's a whole lot of negatives!

Holocron

Holocron #4 · Mar 24th, 2018 · · ·

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I know, I'm so proud

Infamous Paradox

Infamous Paradox #5 · Mar 24th, 2018 · · ·

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¯\_(ツ)_/¯

Holocron

Holocron #6 · Mar 24th, 2018 · 3 · 2 ·

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The purpose of this story was to make readers upset. If they had the time and energy to click the dislike tab over a simple 1K, then that means the story had a degree of an impact on them.

F14m3rz

F14m3rz #7 · Mar 25th, 2018 · · ·

I don't much have a problem with a 1k word fic about this. If it were a 128-some-odd-page hentai about some OC no one gives a shit about fucking Ember with his foot-and-a-half dick before NTR'ing Spike at the end, then I'd have problems. But luckily, this is a paragraph that exists.

"Princesses can NEVER wield the Bloodstone Scepter." Torch replied, his enraged eyes glared down at his broken daughter. His massive cock now aligned with the pussy he had beaten and raped only hours earlier. "You can come off the rape rack, when you learn your lesson properly."

Rape Rack. Rape... Rack. The fact that he's addressing it like it's just a normal thing makes me think that this isn't the first time he's used it. Like, is it a punishment that Dragon Lords use on their children when they misbehave, or do all dragons do it?

But she’d live a miserable life; her pussy would be too loose for any male dragon.

I dunno, if it were slutwriter writing this, I'm sure Spike would be able to 'fill' that role spectacularly... that is, if he himself isn't being railed by a futa; it's usually all or nothing with that author...

Anyways, I've seen worse. Heck, I've seen worse in a light novel of all things; Rising of the Shield Hero does not fuck around with their villain deaths... Regardless, can't wait to see you make normal stuff again.

The Great Derpsby

The Great Derpsby #8 · Mar 25th, 2018 · 1 · ·

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I'm more upset over the fact that it's just a 1k in the first place. I mean, that's it? Really? And over three hundred of those were a retelling of the episode even!

Holocron

Holocron #9 · Mar 25th, 2018 · · ·

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I do not disagree. The 1K Challenge is a hit or miss. It will either be really good, or will be pretty bad. So I understand your reasoning and thank you for your honesty my friend.

KomodoBrony

KomodoBrony #10 · Mar 28th, 2018 · · ·

I think the story was great it just needed to be more than 1k; because let's be honest, good writing can't be limited. Cause limiting the words had limited the amount of detail that really could've made the imaging jump off the screen. All in all it's still a great piece.

Jep_Pearl