• Member Since 16th Apr, 2019
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Arume_Lux


Mostly just does art. I am not a good author.

Comments ( 19 )

This makes me sad.

11256826
in a fun way?

11256830
Just sad. Good writing, you got me to care.

11256833
Thank you for the compliment :)

11256837
Yeah, could have been a bit longer though.
Still good.

Not brutal enough. "If you aren't in the ICU, it ain't rape."

I hope there's a sequel where she beats her dad's ass

Ooooooh~! Now this is fascinating.

which likened to turn void-black

liked

The tendrim that held her whipped to the side,

tendril

one coming to rest on her beck between her shoulder blades.

back

Her exhausted body was coated in blood, sweat, tears and, as the panting Demon patriarch above removed himself, semen.

I'd have used dashes here, like:

coated in blood, sweat, tears, and—as the panting Demon patriarch above removed himself—semen.

Good fic. Plenty more you could explore with this character, especially with the trauma from this.

11257410
i didnt see the spelling error, thanks!

11257350
if it puts your mind at ease, she does eventually hunt him down and kill him within her lifetime. but i dont think ill be writing many new chapters.

It does thank you

11257497
awwww. What if I want her to grow addicted to it and eventually start begging him for visits despite how weak and guilty and hopeless it makes her feel?

Excellent and evocative, on-point horrific harassment. I enjoyed this.

11257637
kinda unf, but that sounds like a different kinda story I'd write.

Kinda wished this was a bit longer. Still, good stuff. Hope to see more like this!

11259730
just gotta wait an unknown amount of time for me to get another sudden burst of writing i do in like 2 hours

Oh dude, did you take down the Fluttershy story? That was one of the best stories I ever read on here! I've re-read it like 30 times.

11308614
if i were to rewrite it id post it again, but there were some things i didnt like

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