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Bronyxy


Pony fan inspired by great writers such as Pen Stroke and Conner Cogwork

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You know how your alarm always goes off in the middle of your best dream, and how you can never find the OFF button? Well, it’s just the same in Equestria, and even Princesses have the same problem.

But at least it can't be a conspiracy, right …?

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Comments ( 20 )

This is me every night. Working the graveyard shift is horrid. I knew there was a conspiracy!

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You read it here first ...
:raritywink:

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They're organised ...
:raritywink:

Duvet should be a better friend. :rainbowlaugh:

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Duvet gonna get vaporised ...
:raritywink:

Lovely little story, I especially like the ending :rainbowlaugh: Also, I can’t say anything about Luna being out of character, seemed very fitting for her.

Grammar-wise, there was some missing punctuation in direct speech (I can explain more if you wish) and some of the sentences were nearing the “too lengthly and complex” mark, but it was still bearable and didn’t hinder my enjoyment of the story too much.

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Glad you liked it.
Thanks for your support!
:twilightsmile:

I HAVE GONE THROUGH THE SAME THING!!! Are you telling me that the blankets and alarm clock are involved in conspiracy??! Oh, they shall not get away with this!!!!! :flutterrage:

BTW....excellent story. I laughed through the whole thing, especially the very end. :rainbowlaugh:

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Oh, it's perfectly true.
Just be sure to keep an eye on those two and if there's any signs they've been colluding, take the appropriate action (it's not yet illegal to vaporise duvets or alarm clocks).

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Ooh, its not?????:raritystarry: Then I know exactly what I'm doing next time such a.....ahem!.....coincedence, occurs!!!!!

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And while I may not possess Luna's vaporising power.........

I DO posses a small blowtorch......

ALARM CLOCKS AND DUVETS EVERYWHERE SHOULD TREMBLE IN FEAR OF ME!!!!!:pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy:

(Ahem. I promise I'm not insane.......:raritywink:)

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What's the opinion of the blowtorch?

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I'm not sure what you mean......:rainbowhuh:

....but if you mean what I think you do, then not to fear: the blowtorch will be happy to do whatever I say.........including anihilating conspiring alarms and duvets. :pinkiehappy:

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:rainbowlaugh:

Thanks for adding this story to your favorites.
Glad you like it!

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Eeeyup...no prob! Its a really great story! :pinkiehappy:


(And I will have my own story up very, very soon...PINKIE PROMISE!:twilightsmile:)

Yeah that duvet gonna be used as a toilet scrub tomorrow...

Comment posted by TheOneAJ deleted Apr 16th, 2023
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