My Little Mages: The Mirror of Shadow Bolt

by Foxhelm

Epilogue: Start of Omission

As the girls arrived at the theater inside the main build of the city's marketplace, Sunset stopped in front of the concession stand, “Hey bae, you want some popcorn and a drink?” Sunset asked Sci-Twi. Sci-Twi nodded. “Alright you get our seats and I'll get the munchies,” the two parted and as Sunset walked forward she bumped into another young woman, a couple of years younger than her. “Oops sorry, I didn't see you.” she tried to apologize.

The girl had green hair and wore just a pair of denim pants and a brown sweater. She turned to reveal her freckled face and light brown eyes. She sighed, “I get that all the time.”

Sunset offered her hand, “Suns..”

“Sunset Shimmer, we met when you moved here. I am Wallflower Blush.” She said with an annoyed deadpan.

Sunset gave a nervous laugh, “Sorry. I'll try better. Say, you here for the Daring Do movie, my friends are here for it.”

Wallflower shrugged her shoulders. Once Sunset headed to the concession stand, “It’s not like you’ll remember this.” she said in spite as she looked to the floor. There was a glow that lasted a second from within her sweater.

Comments

[Foxhelm]

9554787
What's wrong with Wallflower?

[Godslittleprincess]

So, are you going with the "she erased herself so many times that she practically wished herself invisible" theory because it really feels like that's what you're going with?

[Foxhelm]

9554795
Wait and see

[Starmist18]

You are a very good at this

[Comickook]

Again, really good job on the final two chapters of this story. The exchanges, action, characterizations, general story wrap-up and future story set-up are all well done in all the right places. Yeah, was as aforementioned by other reviewers, you did a great job on making Juniper more complex and sympathetic than what was in the actual episode and I LOVED how well Starlight's talking down Juniper mirrored (no pun intended) how Twilight talked Starlight down more than a year earlier.

[Talesuk]

Did she just decided to erase Sunset's memory of meeting her or something?