The world is the midst a technological boom.
New techniques are being discovered faster than the inventions can be build to harness them for the everyday creature. Power harnesses for the weak, flight kits for the grounded, steam drills for the clawless, and a slew of smaller, but practical appliances to ease the burdens of life.
Yet, as the river time rushes pass one family is spared from its deadly game- the Royal Family.
Unfazed by the world around them, they trot on as they have done so for centuries with little change to their lifestyle. Antiqued by modern standards, but that’s what makes a royal family royal right?
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Chapters (2)
Greater good? But for who? Who makes the choice? Hmm? Greater good for the few or the many? And is the many the good...or only many?
hmm...I like this. Its often that you read storys that never follow through and I applaud you on commiting to a theme of old worn god's and their weird love affair.
I am glad to see someone else aiming for some follow through on cool concept's.
Ps. Their were only a few typos. The dialogue was swell. Honestly I am curious what sparked this torrid tale?
Pps. What happened to bug queen!
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When writing that part, I imagined Twilight assumed she wouldn't be able to win the fight, and made the only deal she believed could save not only Equestria, but the world.
Hmm, a story that excels at atmosphere and hinting to unsettle.
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Hey, thanks for the comment, and glad I managed to nail the 'unsettling' vibe. When writing this story, I wanted to hint there was more we weren't being told, and if you noticed the unicorn guard in the opening chapter, how did he open the gate? I tried adding little clues like that in the hopes it would spark certain questions. I don't know if I will write it, but this was going to be the prologue of a short story (about 10 chapters) that would dive into the world and what happened centuries ago. We'll see if I decided to or not.
Have a review.
Review: What makes the Royal Family royal? - My Little Reviews & Feedback - Fimfiction
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Read the review, and thank you once again for taking the time to do it. It was very insightful to read.
intersting story
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Hello buddy, I appreciate you taking the time to read and comment. If you want, I'm planning a sort of sequel/prequel that won't be started until next month because I'm going to enter two fim contests for this month, and I could alert you once its posted?
Also, if I can ask, was there one thing that stood out to you the most?