Remember Remember the 5th of November?

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Do you remember the 21st night of September?

Omc a new story!! O.0

I really don't have much to say beyond this story is goddamn amazing and I love you for willing it into existence.

In light of this, have a Tempy acquiring belly rubs.
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D'aw, much appreciated! Tempest is New Best Pony :)

Loved it another great story

What, no spoiler alert about "my" new edgepone fetish?

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Huh, I knew I was forgetting something! Of course, we all know it's not a fetish - she's just that good!

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Nah man, it's a fetish at this point lol.

As you drift off to sleep, you know you're not worried. You're an Elite Operative, and you're fighting alongside Tempest Shadow until the end.

It's Fizzlepop Berrytwist.

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I know. But it's explained at the start that Tempest Shadow becomes her Operative name by choice. Plus, cooler name.

Finally a 2nd person romance story w/ tempest

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Happy to be the one to provide it! :)

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Who else? It's not like Pusspuss ever writes anymore :(

So glad you're still writing! This fic was fantastic!

Now to continue diving into your other ones (not that I have those fetishes!)

One hell of a story mate! Loved every word of it, good to see you're still writing and I can barely wait for the next story, who knows? Prehaps we might see these Operatives in future operations?

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Eh, it's always good to go back through the older ones. A few of the pictures are broken on some of them, but I'll be i[dating them with fixes soon.

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Really glad you enjoyed it, Delta! You know, I have theories and ideas for future Operatives stories, but I also wanna get a few fics off my chest that have been on my to-do list for a long time. I genuinely hope one day, Tempest and her Operative will return with an exciting new mystery!

Oh shit, a new Crowley story? I know for a fact I'm gonna like this.

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Everyone thought I was dead... they were wrong! Hahah!

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It was a nice read! Personally, not a big fan of clop, but that's my preference and everything else was good. So, small future question ... would you be interested to let us see more from this line/PoV?

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Well, for the PoV, I have so many other 2nd person stories for your reading pleasure! Most of them contain (skippable) clop, others are just ncie stories.

Unless of course, you mean more Tempest Shadow related stories?

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Yes, that's what I meant. I have read a few of your other 2nd person stories, and enjoyed them too!

EDIT: Aren't all your stories 2nd person? They are, if I recall correctly.

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Yeah, all 2nd person. And Tempest MIGHT be coming back... I have a few ideas for their adventures, but I also wanna focus on other characters first.

Great story, could almost make a movie with this on it's own.

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Thanks for the kind words, fave and watch!

Such a nice story!! Thanks to The Abyss for sending me here!!

Keep up the good work!!

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That Abyss sure is a nice fellow, ain't he?

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No problem, thanks for answering! I'd love to see "you" and Tempest working together again. Also, more Best Princess Luna next time, please! Just a suggestion.

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Now that you mention it, I still have to finish that fic! I suppose Luna's ending will be next on my chopping block.

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Actually, don't take this the wrong way, it's not meant to be offensive, but why did you complete this before that? Judging by your stories history it seems like you usually complete 'em before putting up a new 'fic. [Forgive me if I misread, but there's almost no date overlaps]

Because I thought of this fic immediately upon watching the MLP Movie, and I wanted to get this out there while Tempest Shadow was still fresh in everyone's minds, including my own. I honestly thought this fic would be a lot shorter than it turned out to be; I just kept writing!

Well, yours was the Tempest Shadow that I’ve read. I must say, well written! In fact I’m looking forward to reading your other works.

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Thanks for reading, glad you liked it! My other works haven't been touched in years, mind, but I do hope you enjoy looking through them!

Nice story. I found a couple minor things in this last chapter you may want to edit.

Working your hooves down her body, and resting at her hips, you feel a stirring in your loins awaken as she faintly moans; barely audible, but you can feel the vibrations through her kiss..

Extra period.

She turns at an angle, granting you the perfect view of both her whole body, and ther firm backside.

And "her". Still, really liked this story. Thanks for the great story.

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Eh, at least that should be it for Typos now, eh? Thanks.

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Hell, I would ask for a sequel to this. That's a great story there mate. Cheers fer that, ey.

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Yeah, Crowley and I talked it over and determined that I overreacted to a miscommunication... TBH, I'm honestly about to delete my comments so that my notifications will stop filling up with literally all the replies to my sleep-deprived fuck up telling me what I already know (that I fucked up)

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I think I'll take the best route and delete all comments relating to the incident, mine and everyone else's included; leaving them here will just bring about bad vibes.

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Appreciated... thank you again

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No problem. And hey, there's still time to enjoy the fic, if you haven't finished it! :)

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I actually did go back and finish it later last night, and I'm glad I did. It ended up being something I really enjoyed reading

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Really glad to hear that! :)

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Not quite ;)

She invitingly swishes are tail

Excellent work. This is going in my faves for sure. Not many write second person, and you're pretty good at it.