Set one month after the Storm King Crisis, Tempest Shadow joins a prestigious branch of the Royal Guard known as the Elite Operatives. Her first ever partner - you - must work with her to solve a theft, and potential threat to Equestria.
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I'm really liking this story so far. Found a minor thing you may want to edit.
That should probably be "down".
Sextual tension, indeed.
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Man, so many re-reads and spell-checks, and I STILL miss a few of them! Cheers.
For once, an intimate chapter WITHOUT cursing/swearing.
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Yeah, I never really stand much for that either. It kills the mood, things are meant to be romantic rather than anything else.
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Yeah. Most of the girls seem unlikely to ever do that, yet most authors have them getting so caught up in the act, they moral grasp slackens and they start a string of vulgar dialogue.
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Yeah. I mean, because of the nature of the show, it's very unlikely any of the characters would swear no matter what.
There's the faint possibility that a good enough writer could make, say, Chrysalis swear a few times and have it believable, but too much and it just ruins the immersion.