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Crowley


I write second-person sensual fiction featuring you and your favourite ponies. If there's anything you'd like to know, just ask, I'm always happy to answer questions!

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Dan

Buying a new dress? I always thought the greyish blue skirt she always wore was enchanted to seal her uncontrolled earthpony powers so she doesn't crack the earth and release lava geysers with every step.

Still want to hug her, even if she'd pulverize my bones without trying.

Yes!!! Love that you have this as a shared world instead of a seqeul. A companion. A story that stands on its own. Though I loved Bark at the Moon, that was its own story and was told. Love this. Instant Tracking and a instant favorite when it is done.

This was so nicely written! Can't wait for more!

Your eyes drift around your pride and joy, your own clothes shop; The Smart Ass .

I... Crowly, you magnificent b.... best writer :rainbowlaugh:

No. I come from a rock farm somewhere between Appleloosa and Somnambula.

Huh, is Somnambula also a name of a place? I must've missed something...

I must say, I didn't expect for you to write in Maud's perspective. Knowing how emotionless she seems to be on the outside, it must be tricky to write in her perspective while making sure she's in character. Or I'm just not good enough to write Maud's personality

A very... foreshadowing start. I can't help but think something will happen to Maud in one way or another :pinkiecrazy:

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Cheers! Of course, this isn't the first time the Smart Ass has been alluded to in my fics...

Yeah, Somnambula's home town is named in her honour, apparently. I like to keep everything as close to the canon as possible, and according to the official map, the rock farm is right between there and Appleloosa. I hope more of those locations are touched on in the show.

And yeah, I remember reading in the comics that Maud feels as much as any other pony (perhaps more), but her biggest issue is that she doesn't know how to show it. In that sense, writing how she feels isn't so bad. But getting others to notice her emotions? That'll be the challenge.

Nice pic of Sapphire. :) where you get it? ^^’

8802069
I usually just find them on Derpibooru. Whatever fits the situation I guess!

Whoa, I never expect you to make a character that swings both ways. But then again, it's with a changeling, and Tarsus CAN transform into a mare, so... I guess you can call it straight...? Sort of...

And I did not sign up for a drinking contest with Maud :pinkiegasp:. I have a feeling I'll fall to the floor like a rock at the next chapter, while Maud looked down at me with her stone cold expression, not effected by the cider at all :rainbowlaugh:.

Can't wait for Monday! You're the only one so far that can make anyone say that

8803001
Well, they're both minor characters. The focus will be you and Maud, the Tarsus-and-Straton storyline just kinda goes on in the background. There MIGHT be a fic if enough people ask for it, but since it's technically two males, I'm expecting it to be a rather niche thing, especially since it's a minotaur and a changeling.

Very nice chapter. Still, there's one minor typo you may want to edit.

Your spanking hoof grabs a firm hold of her flank, steadying yourself as you trust harder and deeper into her.

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Bleh, no matter how much I re-read it, something always gets through! Ah well.

Marvelous end to the story. Was also a pleasure to take part of and hope you continue wittting.

I hope that drawer is soundproof, I'm afraid poor Boulder will never be the same again :derpyderp2:

It's interesting that you choose to do a 'rowdy' scene for Maud, I don't really understand spanking, but then there's the tail tugging :rainbowkiss:
Your ability to 'deliver' fetishes to people is still good (If you can call that a fetish), rock on, Mr Crowley!

And also...

After a moment of uncertainty, she her tongue returns, gently testing your own.

Hmm. Perhaps not. No matter how versatile a changeling is, if you're sharing a bed with a minotaur, the word "sore" is gonna crop up at some point in that story. You respectfully decline.

:rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:

Also, is it bad that I was expecting a pic somewhere, but didn't find one? :derpyderp1:

Nice fic overall, Crowley :rainbowkiss:

...I'm not sure how to end my comment, so let's just say that this fic rocks and shines like a diamond :twilightsmile:

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Yeah, the main issue is that I've done so many fics at this point, I feel I need to make each scene special for each character. Maud seems like the reserved yet powerful type who'd be able to take a little rowdiness.

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Man, I completely forgot to make a pic! I may amend that in the coming days.

Thanks for reading! :)

8803700
I, for one, would totally dig that. Second person m/m is something there is FAR too little of here.

So happy Maud went for it. I hate it when characters throw away opportunities for pride. It would be one thing if she didn’t deserve this but she does, Strategem was just an ass. No pun intended.

Crowley. You’ve done it again. Bravo.

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