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The first chapter is the second most difficult to write (behind the last chapter, of course). It sets the tone, it builds expectations, and it is in the first few paragraphs that people will expect an idea of what is coming. So of course I wrote a scene where Pinkie Pie is fantasizing about screwing Cup Cake. No, the story is not exclusively about that, and they aren't even the pairing that is the focus. Please settle in, relax, and make sure to dose up on insulin, because I hope that I can do the story plan justice here.

P.S. While it looks like the usual, fanon Pinkamena in the art, there will be no violence in this. I despise gore-for-gores-sake, and Pinkie as a cheap knock-off of Benjamin Barker is only ever that. It is a disservice to her character to portray her anywhere near that shallow.

This sounds really cute, so in my tracking box it goes.

As for the artwork, I love Pinkemena, just not the way most people describe her. Being an axe wielding psycho is not how the show portrays her at all, so idk why people write her as such.

Omg this is good you should make more.

I can never find one about scoots and silver so I started to make my own

Ooh, BDSM with aftercare...

8465023 Thanks. Added to that group! :pinkiehappy:

pants for three hours reading it. Ow ow ow my *****

"More muscles now. Your withers and shoulders, relaxed and calm. Your back and haunches, still and peaceful. Your gaskin and forearm, relaxed and calm. Cannons and pasterns, still and peaceful." Fluttershy guided each major muscle group towards relaxation, and as she spoke she could see Pinkie seem to slump a little more, but the one sign of complete relaxation still eluded her; Pinkie Pie's ears were still perked forward. "Your eyes aren't completely relaxed yet, they are closed."

You know your horse anatomy

8465290 We live in the age of the internet, anyone can be at least a little expert on anything. Meninges, horse anatomy, nitro-fueled dragsters? They are all things you can research with just five minutes on Google (sometimes a lot less). :twilightsmile:

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Yeah, but some people don't still, like info on hymens

...So it's just accepted in the story that Pinkie is futa? I'm cool if that's the case I was just surprised at everypony's either in the know or extremely calm about discovering it.

Otherwise carry on!

8467073 Yes. It is much easier to cover up for a lack of a dong than to hide having one. Regular readers will know what I am talking about. :twilightblush:

8470003 Your command is my wish...

So is Pinkie a bilogical stallion that identifies as female, a true hermaphrodite, or something else altogether? :applejackconfused:

8470466 Heh, if I could link the full image from Derpibooru there would be no mistaking it. Pinkie has the body of a mare, but instead of female bits, she has male ones. :pinkiehappy:

For Mistress Pinkamena:

do you intend on getting Fluttershy pregnant?

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Effeminate looking stallion that uses female pronouns/identifies as female then. Gotcha :twilightsmile:

Comment posted by Damaged deleted Oct 6th, 2017

For Fluttershy:
It must be hard having fangs while sucking 'Mr. Humpy'? Are you worried you might injure Pinkie? On a related note, why didn't you tell Twilight about this? She would have fixed it I'm sure.

For Pinkamena:
Have you thought about getting others in on your shenanagins?

Thank you for answering my question Fluttershy, and sorry for embarrassing you.
One thing I am curious about though, do you plan on helping Pinkie integrate some of her repressed feelings from Pinkamena into her normal parsona? I'm no expert but I think it would do her good if she could relieve herself without having to be hypnotized.

Question for Fluttershy : do you plan on wearing your collar all week, showing to everypony that you have been claimed, or only when Pinkamena is here?

To Fluttershy and/or Pinkamena: I know you have the sexual aspects of your relationship, and damn is it hot, but do you think you will make it a romantic relationship as well, including Pinkie?

Pinkie Pie: the stuff Pinkamena is doing with Flutters seems to be making her really happy. With that being the case, wouldn't doing those things with her constitute as a Pinkie Pie thing? You could even have her use her hypnosis to make you more comfortable with it, which also makes her happy and would also be a Pinkie Pie thing.

Fluttershy/Pinkamena: now that you two have a strong relationship will you ever think of spicing it up a bit such as public accessible locations or in the nearby woods?

8486003 Oooo, Fluttershy being watched by her animal friends... kinky. If the animals made any little comments to each other fluttershy would be able to understand them, I wonder if Fluttershy would be into that level of humiliation.

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This was cute and erotic. I loved it.

They used my question.

:yay: yay

Hehe, locking up inhibitions!

and an accord has been struck!

If it's controlled, can it really be called a disorder?
- riddle for Discord

be careful though, constipation isn't so fun!

I agree with Dlaf rferg, that was sweet & sexy. :raritystarry:
Have you thought about writing a sequel, or at least stories that take place in this universe??:pinkiehappy:

8571851 There hasn't been much in the way of world building, apart from Pinkie Pie being a little different. Anything further in this world would like be centralized around these two. It might happen, but I don't know of anything at this stage.

>SSC BDSM
>aftercare
>realistic(ish) hypnosis
>cuddling
>tenderness
Why is this combination seemingly so hard to find? I love seeing this exact kind of thing promoted, as not only is it hot as all get out, but it’s just so healthy for the relationships of the involved parties and just... I can’t think of the words to express myself. Thank you.

8654512 Yeah. I quite enjoy writing them, too. :twilightsmile:

Surprisingly adorable.

8713271 Thanks! I like to write stories that, despite the lewd, are still recognizably pony. :twilightsmile:

"Mine." Pinkamena let her straight, pink mane flow down over Fluttershy's own. She owned Fluttershy in all senses of the word, and that meant she could keep stroking her until her pet climaxed again and again. "Mine."

Yes Pinks, Flutters is aaaaaall yours:pinkiecrazy:.

9290035 Yes, she's intersex.

If you plug that ID number into derpibooru, you'll see.

"I mean, Pinkie Pie can have the days of the week, and I will have you for weekends." Pinkamena held back from proving her control further. "Subject to change as needed. Can't be helping on a friendship emergency while I dominate you, can I?"

Good point:ajsmug:.

Sighing in contentment, Pinkie Pie's thoughts quickly ran to baking, planning the next party, but still included snuggling with Fluttershy. After all, snuggling made Fluttershy happy.

I would snuggle with Fluttershy any day:scootangel::rainbowkiss::heart:!!!

Rocking, Fluttershy had surrendered completely to whatever Pinkamena wished, and it seemed the wish of her Mistress was to give Fluttershy constant, rolling orgasms. It was wonderful, it was amazing, and Fluttershy wanted nothing else but to be with her friend, and her mistress.

I'm really liking this Mistress and Pet relationship with Pinkie Pie and Fluttershy...:heart:!

"Mistress?" Fluttershy was comfortable being under Pinkamena, more comfortably than she could have imagined before.

Pinkamena nibbled a little, playfully, on Fluttershy's nose. "Yes, pet?"

"I want to go on some dates with you, too."

"Of course." Pinkamena tried, and failed, to imagine how such a date would go. "I will be wearing the socks, though."

Fluttershy giggled and kissed Pinkamena's smiling mouth. "Perfect."

I'd love to see Pinkie Pie in socks:rainbowkiss:!

9290967 I quite enjoy writing happy relationships like this. :twilightsmile:

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