• Member Since 1st Oct, 2013
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Miss Vixen


Just a simple philosopher of writing and stories. Self proclaimed of course.

Comments ( 6 )

I feel like something got lost, because all of the spaces between paragraphs are gone.

Other than that, it's just as enjoyable now as it was the first time.

8372455
I think it was the transfer from grammarly.com to here. Oh well easy fix.

Contains implied incest.

You know Scootaloo and Rainbow Dash aren't actually related. Right?

8376335
It was at the request by superfun for the incest so I toyed with a sister dynamic for them.

Okay, gave it a read. Large walls of text, mixing past and present tense and done grammar errors. The sex was...okay. Shame there was no safe word, or discussion beforehand.

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Well I am still getting more experience writing sexy stuff. As for the talk before hand I will be addressing it in the second chapter, but the incident I portrayed by accident was requested by superfun so I had to keep respectful for what was being asked of me. Finally as for the grammar if it is possible to point such problems out for the use of grammarly.com and what little schools teach nowadays it will be super helpful.

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