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what's with the RANDOM all CAPS?
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Apologies. They're meant to be there for emphasis. I might go back and just bold them, or italicize
From the tags, we know that Mistress D is one of 3 ponies. But which one?
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Heh! That's something you AND Twilight are gonna find out. Why do you think Twilight was blindfolded at the end of this chapter?
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Well, one of them she'd be able to tell just from voice. Of the other two, one has shown she can drop her accent, the other we don't have enough Intel on.
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Lol. Not giving anything away. Just keep reading.
Looks interesting, keep up the good work
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Much obliged. Chapter 2 is being written as we speak.
I think I wrote a Fanfic similar to this once, though that was under another name. Looking forward to what this one has in store.
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Wow. High praise. Thank you
No hints in Mistress D's speech pattern.
There better not be any false tags on this story.
(I do believe you can remove and add tags to the story as you go, author. Not have to put all the character ones before they even appear)
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Nope, no false tags in this. Good on you for analyzing Mistress D's speech pattern. Once we meet the three candidates that could be her identity, things will start falling into place, I promise you.
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I am 99% sure Mistress D is not Pinkie.
If she turns out to be Pinkie, I think you will have many readers ready to assault you with baked bads.
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Lol. Understandable, as she doesn't seem very Pinkie-like. I know her identity, but you all will gradually see WHO she is and how the nebulous and mysterious Mistress D will morph into one of the three candidates. It's less that the characteristics of Mistress D will come out in the candidate, it's actually more that the characteristics of the candidate will come out in Mistress D.
Did dream reveal truth? Or is author being tricksy with readers?
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Lol. The dreams aren't the actual reveals. The actual reveals come later.
Of course, it's entirely fuck all to do with Luna and even less to do with Celestia what Twilight dreams of.
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The Princess's are more background characters in this story. Though, in one of the later chapters, Celestia goes SO over the top it's actually funny.
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I mean, Princess Cadance ( best Princess ) yeah, sure. I can see her getting involved, because of her familial past with Twilight, all the time she's actually given Twilight sound advice, and she's the Princess of Love, but Celestia? Get out.
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Funny you mention Cadance. Twilight is actually gonna tell her what happened. She's the only one aside from Fluttershy that'll know what happened at the Scarlet. Luna just saw Twilight's dreams and is jumping to conclusions and Celestia is overreacting based on Luna's word of mouth. Cadance is actually going to be the one who KNOWS what happened because Twilight tells her.
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Aaaah. Then I am really interested to read further, if only for the awesome that is Cadance.
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It gets even better. Cadance is gonna go undercover in the Scarlet to see if it's on the up and up. Mostly to vet Mistress D. Hijinks will ensue
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Ooooh I can't wait for that!
Also, I really like how you wrote the kink. Well done there.
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Well, thank you very much. I'm very glad you enjoyed the kinkiness. It only gets kinkier from here.
Post hypnotic suggestion or telepathy?
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Post hypnotic suggestion is a good guess but Twilight wasn't hypnotized. Could be her brain compensating for Mistress D not being there and giving herself orders saying they're from Mistress D.
The story is good but I don't like short-changed chapters like this.
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That's what I was thinking - Twily losing a little touch with the old reality?
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Look at it from her perspective. Up till a night ago, she'd NEVER had sex, and then she meets Mistress D and is given one of the most mind blowing nights of her life, along with dreaming of more sessions. Her brain is probably overflowing with endorphins, causing her to hear something like that.
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Oh, I'm not complaining, just curious what Mistress will think when she learns she's competing with herself. ;)
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Bear in mind that Mistress D didn't penetrate her in her their first session so technically Twilight's till a virgin.
Adorable!
Its odd, I don't normally ship TwiPie, but I totally see it here.
Mistress... *D*iane, perhaps?
Cadance: Who has gotten your heart?
Twilight: What? *pffff* I have no time for any of that.
Cadance: Do not fib about entering my domain, sister.
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HAH! You're close!
Damn! A sweet update for sure - teasing Cadance is the best Cadance - but soooo coy on the whole D thing.
I get you're building up a suspense, like who is it, who might it be, but just tell me!
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Do you really wanna know? Do you want me to spoil it?
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No...
I feel like I should say "No Mistress D..."
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Well, it's only right to be polite, isn't it? LOL. Don't worry. All will be revealed in due time. After Applejack meets her dom, I'm planning the next chapter to just be 'Twilight and Mistress D have reunion sex'
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A submissive should be polite at all times
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Sounds like you speak from experience. Lol
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I do.
That's why it irks me no end when I see BDSM stories on here that are at best poorly written smutfics where the author doesn't understand the genre or the lifestyle and at worst an excuse for X to abuse X.
Your story is that unfortunate rare beast, a BDSM fic done right.
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Wow. High praise. Thank you.
Everyone who thinks 50 Shades of Shit is a good BDSM story.
A thousand Dominants all chant allelujah!
All those 50 Shades idiots EVER, who think they can rush into a scene with no safety in place.
This warms my soul, like a cool hand on a fevered brow.
This. This. This! This is why I love this story and it's an example of a good and proper BDSM story.
See! This right here is why my Master allows me to read this story. This whole section is so hot and sexy!
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Thank you so much. I'm so glad to see your comment to this chapter. I did have a lot of fun writing it.
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And it shows! It's just a shame you don't have more views or likes than you do.
Are you going to continue this?
That sounds like a neat trick. Normally the throat swabbing position involves laying on one's back.
Oh boy, that must be distressing to see. All those binary numbers floating about as the properties of Applejack's head are altered in real time. Wonder when she'll decide she's tired of being an Earth Pony and mod herself a horn?
One agony-filled week of being called a bad girl later, Applejack, to her great dismay, would have it spelled out to her by her last hope that she was too headstrong and too independent to make for a good submissive.
Seriously, Applejack is too headstrong and too independent to make for a good submissive.
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Thanks for the comment and for pointing out the errors. I’ll go back and fix them. The modding comment made me laugh. As for Applejack being too headstrong and independent to be a good submissive, you’re correct. But, that’s why she’s training and why she’ll ask Rarity for help. I wasn’t just going to leave that part of her character out of the equation, that’s going to become central to Applejack and Noir’s part of the story. They’re both going to grow and change by the end.