The first chapter is the second most difficult to write (behind the last chapter, of course). It sets the tone, it builds expectations, and it is in the first few paragraphs that people will expect an idea of what is coming. So of course I wrote a scene where Pinkie Pie is fantasizing about screwing Cup Cake. No, the story is not exclusively about that, and they aren't even the pairing that is the focus. Please settle in, relax, and make sure to dose up on insulin, because I hope that I can do the story plan justice here.

P.S. While it looks like the usual, fanon Pinkamena in the art, there will be no violence in this. I despise gore-for-gores-sake, and Pinkie as a cheap knock-off of Benjamin Barker is only ever that. It is a disservice to her character to portray her anywhere near that shallow.

This sounds really cute, so in my tracking box it goes.

As for the artwork, I love Pinkemena, just not the way most people describe her. Being an axe wielding psycho is not how the show portrays her at all, so idk why people write her as such.

Omg this is good you should make more.

I can never find one about scoots and silver so I started to make my own

Ooh, BDSM with aftercare...

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https://www.fimfiction.net/group/207734/the-non-evil-pinkamena
You're definitely not the only ones who feel that way.

8465023 Thanks. Added to that group!

pants for three hours reading it. Ow ow ow my *****

"More muscles now. Your withers and shoulders, relaxed and calm. Your back and haunches, still and peaceful. Your gaskin and forearm, relaxed and calm. Cannons and pasterns, still and peaceful." Fluttershy guided each major muscle group towards relaxation, and as she spoke she could see Pinkie seem to slump a little more, but the one sign of complete relaxation still eluded her; Pinkie Pie's ears were still perked forward. "Your eyes aren't completely relaxed yet, they are closed."

You know your horse anatomy

8465290 We live in the age of the internet, anyone can be at least a little expert on anything. Meninges, horse anatomy, nitro-fueled dragsters? They are all things you can research with just five minutes on Google (sometimes a lot less).

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Yeah, but some people don't still, like info on hymens

Do want.

...So it's just accepted in the story that Pinkie is futa? I'm cool if that's the case I was just surprised at everypony's either in the know or extremely calm about discovering it.

Otherwise carry on!

8467073 Yes. It is much easier to cover up for a lack of a dong than to hide having one. Regular readers will know what I am talking about.

More please

8470003 Your command is my wish...

Hehe, locking up inhibitions!

>SSC BDSM
>aftercare
>realistic(ish) hypnosis
>cuddling
>tenderness
Why is this combination seemingly so hard to find? I love seeing this exact kind of thing promoted, as not only is it hot as all get out, but it’s just so healthy for the relationships of the involved parties and just... I can’t think of the words to express myself. Thank you.

8654512 Yeah. I quite enjoy writing them, too.

Her heart racing, Pinkie Pie's (no apostrophe S) had a moment when reality wasn't back in the right place, and she thought only of mounting Cup Cake and breeding her. There was no hint of any "estrus smell," nor was Mrs. Cake begging to be mounted. One moment led to the next, and Pinkie's Pinkieness reasserted itself and she laughed. "Sorry about that, I guess I need more sleep!" Plucking up the offered cupcake, Pinkie devoured it in one bite.

9551719 Thanks! Got it fixed. I rearranged this one after first writing, it was originally starting with her name so it needed the possessive.