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Palm Palette


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Nopony knows why it happens. It's senseless, horrible, and cruel. Upon growing up, a few unlucky ponies develop animal features, like antlers, whiskers, scales, or even beaks. These hybrids, these fuzzies as they are known, are shunned like freaks and treated like beasts. The world would be better off without them, according to everypony else.

For the most part, Twilight would like to pretend that these sub-equines don't exist, but she can't ignore it when Fluttershy falls victim to the curse. This seismic event threatens to tear them apart. She feels like she has no choice but to sever ties and abandon her friend. Ponies have very good reasons for hating fuzzies, and Twilight knows those reasons by heart. It's the right thing to do... isn't it?

Regardless of what she thinks, there's no room for fuzzies in a civilized world, and that's not about to change any time soon. Only a fool would think otherwise.

Chapters (12)
Comments ( 22 )

I... I don't know how to exactly respond to this.
But it's rather... Interesting. I like it!
This idea of ponies being cursed and then hatred is directed at them for something they had no control over.
It's a rather dark tail to a bright world, or so we think.
Overall, fantastic story. I look forward to more promising stories such as this and I especially want to know what inspired this for you.
Excellent job!

When Twilight was going over the overexposures to magic information....

Damnit Discord

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Hm... I'm feeling .. something familiar here.

I love it, I hope there is a sequel or spin off to it

I've tried to express my thoughts on this fic six times now to no avail.
I will instead sum up how I feel about this first chapter in emojis.

:ajbemused::twilightangry2::flutterrage:

“Why not?” he asked, staring forlornly at his lost breakfast.

In a bizarre turn of events, ponies are mentally deficient and SPIKE is the intelligent force in the world. :moustache:

“Oh! Of course! They're bound to be devastated. This is a great opportunity for learning about friendship. C'mon, Spike!”

Twilight, you're a terrible friend. :facehoof:

“Was? But she hasn't gone anywhere. She's still here, isn't she?” Spike asked.

Normally I enjoy competent Spike but somehow this makes me angry.

“Her?” Twilight blinked. “Uh, I guess, but I was asking about you.”

Have I mentioned Twilight is terrible yet?

Heh. And Pinkie Pie turned the whole town against Fluttershy, a real fuzz-buster in action! Though a nagging voice told her that was unlike the Pinkie she knew, redoubling her unease.

Twilight is officially an idiot.

Twilight's eyes widened and her wide grin vanished. At this rate, that knot in her gut was going to become an ulcer. What was up with her friends wanting to see Fluttershy? Of course a fuzzy wouldn't want to be seen by anypony. Nopony should want to see them, either.

Woah, hear that? The sound of an obvious moral whooshing over Twilight's head.

“Spike, don't listen to her! ” Twilight wailed, magically snatching his tail and dragging him back.

Twilight JFC how much kool aid did you even DRINK

Twilight waved her hoof dismissively. “She couldn't have known that Pinkie was a beast lover. That obviously doesn't apply to her.” Tapping a hoof on her chin, Twilight hummed softly. “Oh! Spike, do you know where the Mindbending Compendium 9000 got to? I want to look up Abraca's Ultimate Hypnosis. Magic can't fix fuzzies, but a reformation spell might be exactly what Pinkie needs.”

So are you legitimately trying to make me wish death upon the main character? Or is that accidental?

“It doesn't matter. She's still Fluttershy.”

GEE, WHAT A NOVEL CONCEPT.

“Uh, yeah. I guess I can do that.” Rainbow Dash shook her head and slunk off, leaving them alone.

You bitch. You just ruined the element of loyalty.

The black-clad pony froze, as if placed under a spotlight. “Oh no no no, darling!” She paused, and coughed into her hoof. When she spoke again, it was in a fake, forced, hoarse voice. “It is I, the one, the only, Raspy Voice. ”

First and only chuckle of this fic.

Harrumphing, Raspy stomped a hoof on the ground. “Twilight, I'll have you know that being a sympathizer is not a bad thing. Fluttershy's in a terrible spot right now. She's lost everything that's dear to her. Her whole life was torn away in one drastic, terrible moment. She's more distraught than anyone right now, and yet so few ponies even acknowledge her existence, let alone her suffering. I had to do something. ”

Let me guess, Twilight only becomes more resolute despite the extremely sound logic.

Twilight shook her head. “What do you want me to say? That you've changed my mind? Completely shattered my world view?”

“Well, that would be nice.”

It would also make sense given the bombshell that was just dropped, but sadly no.

Twilight bit her lip. She tried to follow Rarity's logic. Fuzzies weren't as bad as the stories? She didn't believe that, but she could believe it of Fluttershy. But she also couldn't see other ponies believing that, especially after surveying the damage to her cottage. The risk was very real and Fluttersy was still a fuzzy even if she wasn't a bad one. Why risk so much for something that was basically nothing? Fluttershy was nothing? Twilight shuddered. She was giving herself chills. It seemed true, but...

Oh good, maybe reality is finally starting to assert itself in Twilight's brain.

“Oh. Oh my.” Her cheeks flushed and she glanced up at the sky. “I guess I really am different. The thought of... tigers ... isn't instantly revolting. Hmm, I wonder if I could get a tiger disguise from Rarity too. I know she's emphasized my pony side, but... having a backup couldn't hurt.”

NO FLUTTERSHY DONT DO IT

Tigers have spikey dicks it's awful

“Well, repeated exposure to high levels of magic, particularly transformative, can result in the subject taking on the characteristics of multiple types of animals at once. With each subsequent alteration, they become more wild and chaotic, both in appearance and temperament. A fuzzy who has degraded like that is known as a composite horror. There's a good reason that such practices have long since been banned.”

...Discord...?

I still can't get over Pinkie. In a way, she's even more disturbing than the thought of fuzzies living secretly in town. It's like she was born with some kind of freakish, vile, inability to hate—

Here comes an epiphany!

Twilight rolled her eyes. “Well, fuzzies have been around as long as anypony can remember, so the other ideas tend to be myths and legends. One of the more common ones being an ancient spirit of disharmony cursing pony kind to reshape us in its image, and sow chaos in our ranks.” She shook her head. “Dumb I know. Fuzzies are all kinds of hybrids, so how could that be 'in its image?' I prefer something that can be explained by science.” She finished off the rest of her drink with a big gulp and wiped the foam from her lips.

Twilight Sparkle has been in Canterlot's castle. She's seen the stained glass windows of Discord. Yet she doesn't believe in him? Wow.

Twilight snorted. She gave him a flat stare. “Not this time, Spike. This is serious. Bring me my stack of notes cards and that old soap box. I'm going to lecture them. ”

Your funeral, kid.

She didn't look at them, instead reading directly from her notes. “Hello, and good afternoon, everypony,” she said, flipping to the next one. “We are here to discuss an important matter.” Flip. “As you all know, Fluttershy has—” Flip. “—most unfortunately turned into a fuzzy,” Flip. “but in the grand scheme of things,” Flip. “this may turn out to be—” Flip. “—a blessing in disguise.”

Twilight your notes are awful.

Twilight chuckled. “That she will.”

And then Twilight was imprisoned in the place she was banished to.

This story was... eh.

I hated the main character for most of the fic, and it was only near the end that her irrational hatred was explained. And the conclusion was... rushed. It just didn't feel satisfying. I dunno.

An interesting premise soured by dropping anvils all over it. It could use more discussion of herdthink or some examples of actual memories on Twilight's part.
Bonus points for the fuzz actually mostly being drawbacks, instead of being bland superpowers. I'd read about the further adventures of Fluttiger trying to get along with her life.

Just... Just think about it.
"You have committed an act worst then murder. You are... A... FUZZIE."
I fuckin died when I pictured this to an angry pony. That was my thought process for this entire story. It was great!

Just so much oocness arrrgghh:flutterrage:

8561710
I think even in the canon series spike is a bit more mature than most of the ponies who are adults

8561913
I believe the author is showing how idiotic bigotry and racism is

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