Nopony knows why it happens. It's senseless, horrible, and cruel. Upon growing up, a few unlucky ponies develop animal features, like antlers, whiskers, scales, or even beaks. These hybrids, these fuzzies as they are known, are shunned like freaks and treated like beasts. The world would be better off without them, according to everypony else.
For the most part, Twilight would like to pretend that these sub-equines don't exist, but she can't ignore it when Fluttershy falls victim to the curse. This seismic event threatens to tear them apart. She feels like she has no choice but to sever ties and abandon her friend. Ponies have very good reasons for hating fuzzies, and Twilight knows those reasons by heart. It's the right thing to do... isn't it?
Regardless of what she thinks, there's no room for fuzzies in a civilized world, and that's not about to change any time soon. Only a fool would think otherwise.
I... I don't know how to exactly respond to this.
But it's rather... Interesting. I like it!
This idea of ponies being cursed and then hatred is directed at them for something they had no control over.
It's a rather dark tail to a bright world, or so we think.
Overall, fantastic story. I look forward to more promising stories such as this and I especially want to know what inspired this for you.
Excellent job!
When Twilight was going over the overexposures to magic information....
Damnit Discord
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Hm... I'm feeling .. something familiar here.
I love it, I hope there is a sequel or spin off to it
I've tried to express my thoughts on this fic six times now to no avail.
I will instead sum up how I feel about this first chapter in emojis.
In a bizarre turn of events, ponies are mentally deficient and SPIKE is the intelligent force in the world.
Twilight, you're a terrible friend.
Normally I enjoy competent Spike but somehow this makes me angry.
Have I mentioned Twilight is terrible yet?
Twilight is officially an idiot.
Woah, hear that? The sound of an obvious moral whooshing over Twilight's head.
Twilight JFC how much kool aid did you even DRINK
So are you legitimately trying to make me wish death upon the main character? Or is that accidental?
GEE, WHAT A NOVEL CONCEPT.
You bitch. You just ruined the element of loyalty.
First and only chuckle of this fic.
Let me guess, Twilight only becomes more resolute despite the extremely sound logic.
It would also make sense given the bombshell that was just dropped, but sadly no.
Oh good, maybe reality is finally starting to assert itself in Twilight's brain.
NO FLUTTERSHY DONT DO IT
Tigers have spikey dicks it's awful
...Discord...?
Here comes an epiphany!
Twilight Sparkle has been in Canterlot's castle. She's seen the stained glass windows of Discord. Yet she doesn't believe in him? Wow.
Your funeral, kid.
Twilight your notes are awful.
And then Twilight was imprisoned in the place she was banished to.
This story was... eh.
I hated the main character for most of the fic, and it was only near the end that her irrational hatred was explained. And the conclusion was... rushed. It just didn't feel satisfying. I dunno.
An interesting premise soured by dropping anvils all over it. It could use more discussion of herdthink or some examples of actual memories on Twilight's part.
Bonus points for the fuzz actually mostly being drawbacks, instead of being bland superpowers. I'd read about the further adventures of Fluttiger trying to get along with her life.
Just... Just think about it.
"You have committed an act worst then murder. You are... A... FUZZIE."
I fuckin died when I pictured this to an angry pony. That was my thought process for this entire story. It was great!
Just so much oocness arrrgghh
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I think even in the canon series spike is a bit more mature than most of the ponies who are adults
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I believe the author is showing how idiotic bigotry and racism is
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