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Palm Palette


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Twilight Sparkle was vaporized by the Elements of Harmony after attempting to fix Star Swirl the Bearded's failed spell. Distraught with grief, her friends refuse to accept Twilight's fate and turn to necromancy to bring her back.

Note: This story used to have both the Twilight and Twilicorn character tags before they were merged.

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You had me at "[Comedy] Twilight was vaporized."

So thanks for that.

Yay! Twilight's dead! ......
Oh, she's not? Darn.

“Oooh! Oooh!” Pinkie Pie pulled another Pinkie Pie out of her mane. “I always keep a spare mirror pool clone around in case of ritualistic blood sacrifice emergencies!”

:facehoof: You're a genius. A goddamn genius.

Although I didn't laugh as much as you probably expected me to, this was a great read. My brain melted at some points because of funky pentagram ritual stuff, but that's me. It wasn't confusing or anything, it was just that crazy from the beginning. And somehow, I can see Rainbow Dash being a hidden mushy type after a supposed 'death', even if she tried to hide it.

And that ending. Oh my... it just got better. Although I think the punchline you went for has been debated, argued and done to death, therefore not having many more comedic opportunities for situations, it was still nice to see. It didn't get a laugh out of me, rather a, "Oh god why?" but it was still fun.

And now to re-read Blue Cheese, because that's just hilarious, and after seeing it was you who wrote this, it makes me wanna go back and re-read it.

TGM

“Um...” Second Twilight unfolded not one, but two pairs of wings.
Pinkie Pie groaned and planted a hoof on her face. “Hasbro.”

I don't think I need to tell you how genius this is.

well done. :yay:

hi hi

I would have watched it. :twilightsmile:

This is hilarious! :rainbowlaugh:

@Palm Palette...

1. I was entertained for reading this. Have a Like and a "well done." :pinkiesmile:

2. An alternate ending...

Everypony looked around. There was no sign of unicorn Twilight, not even a scorch mark on the floor.

“I... The Elements of Harmony? What happened to her?” alicorn Twilight asked.

“You know, Ah feel a lot more alive than I did just a moment ago,” Applejack said. Her green eyes crossed when she saw a single dark blue hair alight on her nose. She sniffled. “Uh, I hate to break it to y'all, but I think the Elements of Harmony undid all of that dark magic we used to raise her from the dead.”

“No!” Fluttershy wailed. “Oh, poor second Twilight. She only existed for a few minutes, but already I feel like I've lost my best friend.”

~~~ X ~~~ ~~~ X ~~~ ~~~ X ~~~

The door to the library burst open, and a second alicorn Twilight entered, followed by Princess Luna.

"Sister!" announced the lunar alicorn, "We were raising the moon and shrouding the night skies when we sensed Twilight Sparkle's entry into the Hall of Ascension! However, we could not locate thee! So we took the liberty of performing thine musical number, then raising her up to alicorn status as is her dest-" Luna took in the scene, seeing the first Twilight by Celestia.

Luna recoiled in shock, "The Twilights have been doubled!"

THAT...WAS.....HILARIOUS!

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I agree. That would lead to nice sequel. :rainbowlaugh:
http://www.fimfiction.net/story/15083/i-forgot-i-was-there
Yes it was done, but... Not with alicorn and elements of harmony and comedy tag.

Edit. Okay, there was a comedy tag, but it's not fun and giggles all around.

I wouldn't mind a sequel. Two Alicorn Twilight's would be all kinds of fun:pinkiehappy:

“Do you think we could ritualistically sacrifice her anyway?”

“I don't see why not.”

:rainbowlaugh:

This is hilarious!

4739125 why do u want Twilight to die?

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I'll have to make a forum or blog post about this sometime and map out my reasoning. Lets just say that recently I've begun to really dislike Twilight Sparkle. It just sorta happened.

Second Twilight also gains a second horn! She's Super Alicorniyan 2!! :pinkiegasp::twilightoops:

This was silly. :rainbowlaugh:

Quite right, quite right, silly, silly, silly. Right then; get on with it!

GET ON WITH IT! :ajbemused:

Why does Owlowicsious have a book that can raise the dead? Yes, that is the only thing I'm thinking about.

Funny thing is that after the magical mystery cure aired you see video popping where Twilight enters the hall of ascension and celestia opens her mouth and says "Congratulations twilight, you are now dead

great history, what could happen with two twilights?

Thanks to the person who PMed this to me. It's some useful constructive criticism:

Spike vanished from the last 1100 words. I lost interest before the last few hundred.

hey, can we get an epilogue where we get to see the continuation of that twidash that was hinted at? pretty please?

The Owlnomicron. :rainbowlaugh:

“Um...” Second Twilight unfolded not one, but two pairs of wings.

Pinkie Pie groaned and planted a hoof on her face. “Hasbro.”

Pffft.

I have written a review of this story. It can be found here.

That was so funny that I did this

I just discovered this story. Awesome! Really needs a sequel!

“Oooh! Oooh!” Pinkie Pie pulled another Pinkie Pie out of her mane. “I always keep a spare mirror pool clone around in case of ritualistic blood sacrifice emergencies!”

Wait what?!... WHAT?!?!

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