This story was pretty good if occasionally cheesy. I love the fetishes mind you, but the phrases Dash used occasionally, I wasn't as fond of as they broke immersion. Well done. This isn't the first story I read from you and this was just as high quality as those. I don't mind silliness, but just Dash's sex phrases were a little too weird for me.

So, I got a question before I read this.

The Piledriver position.

Does Shining Armor Tombstone Rainbow dash?

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Nope. I meant the sex position that is called like that with Rainbow on her back and her plot in the air as she is fucked into the ground.

Mmmm, that's some good Cum-Slut Dashie! Nicely done.

Wonder if it would be possible for you to continue this one? :) and maybe see her nice and awesomely pregnant? <3

Hm no sequel with Cadance?

yummy yummy crummy in dash's tummy :)

It got featured, 'grats.

Also noteworthy is that someone asked me to do a reading of this story and even did that today! So this story now has an audio reading!

Let's see what the story has.

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Yes, please.

I know this is about magical pastel colored equines having a go at each other but they must all have AIDS now...

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They live in a world of magic... they probably already have the cure for that.

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I guess it is rather silly sometimes, but I actually like it if things are silly sometimes. Of course I know that it can be too silly or weird for some people, but that's just my kind of humor. Heck, I even want to write a story with changelings hanging ponies on the ceiling and filling their bellies with glowing cum to use said ponies as lamps!

Anyway, I'm glad you liked my work regardless.

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Only a Cumslut Dashie is a good Dashie! So, yeah, I'm satisfied with my work that ended up with her being bathed in hot stringy cum!

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Nope. Not really planning on it. I really don't feel like writing a sequel. Not to mention I have a lot of other stories planned and still have to continue. So, I can only hope you guys will stick with the new smut I will publish.

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Heh, yup. Twilight Freakout Session. Dashie is gonna have fun with that!

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I guess it is rather silly sometimes, but I actually like it if things are silly sometimes. Of course I know that it can be too silly or weird for some people, but that's just my kind of humor.

While adding in your own sense of humour is great, there is such a thing as overdoing it, which will inevitably lead to "killing the mood" for the reader, as it were.

Heck, I even want to write a story with changelings hanging ponies on the ceiling and filling their bellies with glowing cum to use said ponies as lamps!

OK, that is a story I could get behind. Changelings kidnapping mares to breed more changelings, hung from the wall and ceiling to illuminate their den.

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Wow, that gif looks really gay. XD

The story itself is good but you used "slut" way too often. There had been some good positions and, if she would be into sex that much, then the would of course win this
Sadly the whole "slut" killed the mood for me. That and maybe finding some of your other stories

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Hm... That's something to think about, but did I really overdid it? Rainbow announced her sex attacks only two times after all. But maybe I'm missing something...

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It is listed under the point 'Contains' just to make sure, as well as in the title. But of course it can't be everyones cup of tea. In any case the whole slut topic is something I like to use, and I have also heard about people liking it. So, like I said, can't be for everyone.

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What do you mean?

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That's good to know. A friend of mine noticed that I use some words too often too, like 'all too' in my Applejack Gloryhole story, which I then replaced with other words or deleted. So I am prone to making that mistake. I guess prismatic is a neat word and 'prismatic slut' does have a nice ring to it. But it will in any case be something I will keep an eye on. So thanks!

...Well, here comes a 100% probability of STDs!

Can you please make a sequel where Dashie gets it on with Twily after revealing all of this?
Also can you make another story where it shows what Dashie did with the griffons?

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I have a lot of other stories to write, so I have no time for it right now. Not to mention that I would also need some ideas for things like that as well. That is why there is no such thing planned for now.

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ok just wondering

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We all have our favorite words, of course...

* considers adding a "furthermore" key to his keyboard

Impressive story. RD sure can brag about this in so many ways