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Yay! Thank you! :yay:

8312244
You are more than welcome, and it was a pleasure to work with you. Hope your fans on tumblr also enjoy this story as much as you did.

8312253
Pm me the source of the cover art

8312973
nah m8, just go to Derpibooru and search "artist:elzzombie", then look for this picture or one of its edits. The author ain' gotta do the work for ya, and you might find something ya like in the mean time!

8321548
Lol the author already did pm the source

8321548
I gave him the e621 source, same image but I just like that site better.

8326098
Would you like it as well, or another site where fans share the art they find?

8326104
nah, I know where to find it already. Thanks for that, though.

8326197
Alright, let me know if you change your mind on the other site.

Very nice story here! Good introduction with realistic Twilight pacing and mumbling, proper delivery with the dream sequence, good grammar and word choice, all very well done! Only thing that could have been improved was commas in some sentences making it easier to read, and understand sentence flow, but other than that, almost a perfect story! :twilightsmile: Very good, hope for a chapter 2!

8331494
Well this was a one shot request as the description mentions, so the way it ended was to simply stop at a good point. Now anyone can pick up where I left off if they wanted to do a sequel to this, but overall I'm glad you enjoyed it. If you know I group I haven't shared this in, please feel free to share it with them.

Some very interesting TwiDash. Not my favorite ship,but well done, my friend. :twilightsmile:

8381630
I'm glad you enjoyed it.

I would love a sequel to this

8870162
Well it was set as a one shot, simply because it was a request. So it ended as is, you may also enjoy New Meaning for Rigor Mortus. Same requester just a whole different idea.

8870749
It would also be awesome to see the theme further developed by these two

8870845
Well maybe one day if I figure out a good continuation, other wise it would look horribly done.

two more of the sounds echoed across the night sky with only moments between them.

11791058
Not sure why you highlighted that segment, did you just happen to like it?

11791476
It’s a spelling error.

11791666
Ah, must have missed that one.

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