Thomas comes to Ponyville for the 1st time and learns about the Magic of Friendship.
A Warner Bros Creation.
Voice Actors.
Me/Thomas - Samuel Vincent.
Other characters have the same voices.
Chapters (4)
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You do know that revoking and re-submitting your story to remove negative criticism is a bannable offense on here, right?
8295681
It sure freakin' is.
8295719 I also filed a report.
8295722
OK.
I was trying to make the story more right, I swear!
8295725 These replies are also good, because if he tries to delete the story and then repost it to get rid of the comments AND ratings, I can prove that the responses are from the old version of the story rather than the new one.
8295730
If you’re trying to make it better, you didn’t have to revoke the submission. All you had to do was click on the chapter, then click “edit”.
Also, “A Warner Bros. creation”?
Uh, sorry, I got a little carried away.
8295790
I can see.
It's gotta be a trollfic. There's no other explanation.
Best introduction ever.
:'(
8295976
Perhaps reading a few more stories on the site first before writing more would be for the best.
I think introducing someone with a mental condition into ponyville in a story and having them meet the mane six and replicating some real-life issues has the opportunity to be a beautiful, eye-opening idea if it is backed up with real and valid evidence/experience and is executed with respect and a good amount of skill. However, this truly seems to be a troll-fic as others have assumed as well.
8295952 This is how I talk to children at the park.
So what was he doing for seven years in Equestria? You imply that his parents sent him there when he was 10, and then you say that he's 17 and he's about to have his first adventure in Equestria.
I think I have cancer just by reading this
8296113
Ich clapped so hard, my hands started hurting.
Mmmmmm yummy
8295976
Soooo... may I ask, how old are you? I want to know your age group so I can find an editor best suited to your writing level, as it were.
Well, I'm 17 years old, just like the first chapter says.
8297700
Two things: >>, that's yer reply button. Please use it in the future. And 17? Uh... bruh, I'mma be blunt: your writing level is closer to that of... a nine-year-old. You need some major editorial helps.
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Ah'm turnin' 16 this year.
8297901 Grats.
8297922
Yup
8297700
You know, here's my thoughts on this story and idea. I like the fact that you are thinking of more off the wall, original things. You just need to tighten up your fundamentals and give more depth to the story itself. Like, your heart seems to be in the right place.
8297994 And an editor suited to author's writing level (and maybe a little bit on the leeway-giving side, since this is a newbie we're talking about here.)
8297700 Bro I'm 17, almost turning 18, and I'm a fucking idiot in the outside world. Like literally, an idiot. I can't understand paragraphs without forgetting what the first sentence was, I can't follow instructions right, and I'm just a lazy asshole, but at least I know how to write a story.
The greatest strength of this story is....the author. Seems pretty darn friendly, I can't bring myself to downvote this...
Uhh..
Whatever this is.
Wish there were more people/they hadn't re-released it, as I would have enjoyed more of the comment section.