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As they continue their adventure, they stumble upon more enemies,
Applejack in the Box,
and a Super Rainbow hero who joins their team.
As the three journey off, the army of bad guys is waiting. In these kind of conditions, it is brutal.
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Uh...
um...
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Well...
Emoticons in the synopsis are very... distracting. They're also unnecessary. And I've noticed emotes are in one of your other stories' synopses. Could you please... remove the emotes? I find myself unable to focus on what the story is about because of it. :/
Why are there emoticons in the synopsis?
Also, as a general rule of thumb, try to make each chapter roughly a thousand words each; it looks better and it gives the readers something to, well, read.
I can excuse the overuse of emoticons, but I won't excuse false advertising.
Why did you name it 'Fallout Equestria' when it has NOTHING TO DO WITH FALLOUT EQUESTRIA?
It's also a really lazy ponification of those weird Youtube videos. Like, no creativity at all. I'm surprised this even got past moderation.