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Fluttershy has loved Bon-Bon for a very long time. But, due to her relative shyness, she has never been able to voice her feelings. One day, she sucks it up, and gets to know the mare a bit better. However, nothing ever goes as planned, and things start to go wrong...

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a crack pairing for the ages, seeing as how they never spoke once in the show.

909177 Indeed. Picked the most absurd pairing for this one.
However, they might have spoken before, just not on show. We may never know.

909217 That pretty much sums it up.

:rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh: This is HILARIOUS! Dramatic comedies are so funny.

909242 Thanks! Oh, you should just wait for the last chapter...

Nice going, Fluttershy. :ajbemused:

Well, Fluttershy has interacted with Bon Bon before - specifically, she flipped a cart full of refuse onto her in "Putting Your Hoof Down". Truly this romance was meant to be! :raritywink:

I seriously burst out laughing when Rainbow Dash randomly kissed Fluttershy. Are they all in heat or something? :derpytongue2:

909255 Exactly. I'm glad you have caught on. What's more romantic then a dumpload of garbage?

909253 Oh Fluttershy. She be awkward/ruining lives.

909270 Could be. I actually should have mentioned that.
Well, no, actually. It's more "pent up romance." Rainbow Dash has been lusting after Fluttershy fro a LOOOOOOOONNNGGG time. Like, since fillies long time. Fluttershy's was more of a revenge shot thing.

909271 I can't wait for the last chapter then. But seriously, should I still be laughing at the story?:rainbowlaugh:

909281 First chaprter, sure! Second, I could see points where you would laugh. Laughing at the last chapter... I would question your sense of humor.

909290 When is the last one coming out?

909296 Soon. I'm working on like ten other stories, but I will probably get it up either tonight or tomorrow morning.

909307 Um, not written yet? I was telling epicdonus to look forward to it being written.

Definitely waiting for the next chapter.

909396 :yay:

Glad you like it. I'll try and get the chapter up tonight. It could be later depending where you live, I'm in Hawaii.

909410 Ah. So you may have to read it tomorrow, unless you feel like staying up until 1 or 2 in the morning :rainbowlaugh:

909420 .....
yeaaaahhhhh, I did that last night. :pinkiecrazy:
I'll have to read it tomorrow

Surprisingly, there are a lot of Google results for "Flutterbon."

Which you probably already knew.

I for one am hoping its Rainbow Dash whos in Fluttershys house and that they become marefriends. As long as they are together, I don't mind how dark the story gets. :scootangel:

>Not having this listed as comedy also
Wow, things are really escalating quickly.
Nice quick-ship.

909712 Now really? huh. Couldn't find a good picture to use as the story image to save my life.

909934 Hmmm... perhaps.

909944 You think this should be listed as comedy? Really... Probably won't say that when the next chapter shows up.

! Finding beauty in negative spaces? You do know thats the title of a seether album right?

!!!!!WTF? Why did you kill Fluttershy?

Brilliant but demented. I'll just leave it at that.

Drugged-out ponies, it appears, are no more rational than drugged-out humans.

Then again, to be willing to kill over the exclusive possession of somepony's body - surely jealousy is a murderous toxin in its own right, even without pharmaceutical support.

I am, however, impressed that incident to execution took less than ninety days. Among humans, you can barely get a court date to fight a speeding ticket in ninety days.

:derpyderp1: ..........................................................:rainbowderp:

911005 If there was an award I'd give it to you. I eas actually doing a point give away on Deviantart to whoever noticed that first.

911191 Thank you! That's what I was aiming for. To make up for such a disturbing and unsettling ending, I'll write slip Flutterdash into the next story I"m writing, so be on the lookout for it.

911245 EEyup.
BTW, how do you get an image up?

912024 Normally, Bon-Bon and Lyra would not kill over a kiss. The pills did there work. Hopefully this tought you the danger of pills.


912026 I'll assume you are stunned in awe over the amazingness of the ending.

912236 I feel so stupid.

912249 Yes, the ending was quite funny, wasn't it.

Eon

911245
That made me laugh so hard.
So. So hard.

Oh. Well, the last chapter is out now.

I'm sorry but what the :scootangel: just happened? :rainbowhuh:

913259

Yes, but it was too much for me to comprehend. :applecry:

913260 I know right? I put in a nice little twist right there... But there is a reason for the dark tag :twilightsheepish:

913266 Sorry for any trauma or nightmares caused by this. I really didn't think it was that bad... just very dark and sad.

:rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh: I'm sorry! I know you said that you would question my sense off humor, but the third chapter was HILARIOUS! When Fluttershy said that she was down for a threesome, I laughed my HEAD OFF!!! When Lyra and BonBon were sentenced to death by hanging, I said in a British accent "Off to the GALLOWS!" It made the whole sadness, hilariousness! I love the comedic sense in all of the story! You are such an amazing writer, in which you know how to give the reader a good laugh.:pinkiehappy: This has to be one of my most favorite short stories EVER!!! I know this is way to nice of a comment, but you deserved it. Thanks for the laugh.:scootangel:

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