Watching someone snap is exciting to watch—especially from afar.
To Rainbow, it's like witnessing someone forget about their fears, and do whatever it is they have to do. To Rarity, it's like expressing herself in the most distasteful way possible.
And to Spike, well, he's too scared to snap in fear of destroying the town. Again.
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The following is a one-shot from a canceled project. To be honest, I don't even remembering writing it, but I hope there's something there for you readers to enjoy—or not, Lola.
But if you would like a better piece of fiction to set your eyes upon, may I suggest this one?
The Shadow of a Doubt
Fuck yeah. Guardian Spike for the win!
This is a pretty awesome story, I love the little bit at the end which shows that he eventually does use his inner beast for good.
There are a couple of paragraphs that repeat, but overall a fantastic story pertaining to some emotionally satisfying resolution that I honestly wished we had gotten in the show.
Well, that was entertaining. Good job!
Gratz on the feature.
triumphs
doubles?
cheerio
double negative here
something
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Thanks for the edits, but I don't think I have the time to comb through this fic.
There were a lot of errors, but these were the major ones.
Twas a good story overall, and the end gave me 'Attack on Titan' vibes
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Thank you for the edits. I'll try and comb through this piece this week if I have the time.
As much as I liked it, there were a few places in the story where it was obvious you hadn't read it. Upvote anyway, because I do like the story. It just needs to be edited for some of the sentences to make sense. And to avoid repeats. And to remove the mid-sentence carriage return.
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Thank you sir, as you are correct in my editing of only 25% of the story. If I'm ever blessed with free time, I'll try to edit the rest.
Thank you for reading.
What a amazing fic, you really Dig deep in the effect of Spike becoming a monster, they toke this so lightly in the show.
Awesome!
Not to bother you, but I think I found a mistake:
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Thanks for the save.
Seems like a few errors but damn it if this is not an amazing story. I mean holy buck, I would kill to be able to write like you. I loved this story. Really, really good job.