I should be writing. Chances are I'm not.
One day, Spike is alone in the library tidying up when he receives a letter carrying a confession of love from his own affection, Rarity. But as he soon finds out, it's not what it seems. Caught up in a prank war, he then teams up with the lovely mare to exact revenge on the one who wronged him, and in the process, finally clearing the air between himself and the fashionista.
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2598585 It's the little things.
hee hee
This story is so bad. it doesn't deserve a single upvote or like. I really feel like the author should have alluded more to his other story in the works, Prank Massacre. Also the love letter was just plain awful. It had awful grammar and just was painful to read.
And here is Fluttershy being Fluttershy
We can all agree that Rainbow would never do something so horrible to Spike; she uses his feelings to get him unreasonably excited only to laugh when he has his heart broken and possibly damages his friendship with someone he dearly cares for, then even has the gall to try taking advantage of him with no thought to how hurt he would be. Bitch move, Rainbow. Bitch. Move.
But it serves it's purpose for a good fun prank romp. I was almost giddy while watching Spike and Rarity's revenge prank unfold.
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Hold on, this has Spike so...
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that she was hot when she was angry, Ah, the always inappropriate but unavoidable thought.
Well, Rarity seemed pretty into it, so I'm taking that yet as it's totally gonna work out in the end
That is a really horrible prank for Dash to pull though.
that initial prank
Rainbow you monster
I smiled and shook his head.
I smiled and shook my head.*
I liked this, it was sweet and I actually laughed at the way you wrote Spike's thoughts.
"I'm a genius."
and
"Yeah, I'm smooth." were epic.
2598737
Well, Rainbow wrote the letter and she doesn't exactly seem to be the best at grammar. I thought the author did a good job on portraying Rainbow in it.
2598737 It's silly to me how people don't understand the sarcasm at play here.
He even tipped his hand by naming the story this is a part of, which I haven't given out yet.
He's one of my prereaders, gentlemen.
If things don't work out with Spike and Rarity always go back to the golden rule.
2618094 Guardian Sword Light? Adventure Quest? You play?!
2619107 That but the golden rule is if a baby dragon couldn't get the love of his life then go for her little sister.
2619466 No no no. I get the golden rule. I was commenting on your Profile Pic. It's the Guardian Sword as a Light weapon. I was asking if you play Adventure Quest.
2620384 It's the Blade of Awe and yes I'm playing Adventure Quest right now.
Hmm, decently entertaining, but rather anti-climactic. I was hoping Spike was going to set Spike up with Scootaloo.
I also don't understand why it seems like Dash had no idea whether or not her original prank even succeeded, seeing that she apparently completely failed to suspect that Rarity and Spike might be retaliating.
So I guess I liked the first half better than the second.
Most interesting story that i found enjoyable and sweet.
Reading that RD made a fake letter to Spike. I was all like...
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This is the first story I ever read, on this website, I
ed it. It has encouraged me to read more stories 
"She simply adores chocolate" , "Yet" leaves a door open , Nice story, Got lost with Pinkie & Sugar cube corner. Funny lite comical
not what i expected... but great nonetheless