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Spike is in his late teens, but has yet to act on his feelings for Rarity. The Summer Sun Festival is right around the corner and Spike is determined to finally ask Rarity out. There will be heart break before the end, but Spike has plenty of love to give.

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It's short, but definitely grabs your attention, making you want more. Can't wait to see what the next part has in store.

And just when the new episode shows Spike as a teen and up :derpytongue2:

Would spike still have a relatively high voice? Considering that he is still a baby by dragon standards. Or would he have a deeper more masculine voice?

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I'm guessing he would have a different voice. No matter what.
Inviting story it is, cannot wait to read the next chapter of it

Thiessen would argue that Spike doesn't grow wings until he's like 5000, coming from the new episode.

60090 Or gets like 5000 cities' worth of gems...

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He would have a somewhat masculine voice, which is to say, still very high pitched for a dragon.

And then... S:yay:t hit the fan from there...

Oh yeah... and the guards? Their role is to remain stoic the entire time they are with the princess(es), or they lose their jobs. I had trouble comprehending that scene.
...
... So yeah.

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I can't imagine Princess Celestia being the type to fire someone for laughing, but I get where you're coming from. Anyway that scene was just comic relief, so no harm done.:scootangel:

74825 Exactly... The drill sergeants will.

“Oh no, it's her.” Twilight began to panic. “Is my hair alright?”

I laughed. Anyway, actually quite enjoyed the change of pace with Scootaloo asking him out. Looking forward to future goodness!

Gawd damnit Spike.. :facehoof: Anyway great work! Now I am entirely conflicted who I want Spike to be shipped with... CURSE YOU!

*sighs and shakes head* Oh Spike.

:moustache: + :scootangel: = :heart:

:moustache: + :raritystarry: = :heart:

(:moustache: + :scootangel:)/:raritystarry: = :rainbowderp: + :flutterrage: + :pinkiesad2: + :applecry: + :unsuresweetie: + :facehoof: + :raritycry: = :trollestia:

Spike......you're an idiot......all hell breaks loose.....

This is not going to end well.......

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This time, or bust... Mister Author? Can you please remove the other comments? Thanks

Further equations (of fanfics I have read):
:moustache:+:unsuresweetie:=:heart:
:rainbowderp:+:raritywink:=:heart:
:yay:+:twilightsmile:=:heart:
:twilightsmile:+:moustache:=:heart:
:moustache:+:yay:=:heart:
:moustache:+(Luna emote)=:heart:
Therefore:
:moustache:=Stud

spike has always been a stud. rainbow dash is compatible and spike is the new rainbow dash, therefore spike ships with everything.

spike has always been a stud. rainbow dash is compatible with anypony and spike is the new rainbow dash, therefore spike ships with everything.

:moustache:twilight, wipe a few minutes off of raitys memory

this will not end well

dude have u stop writing?

:moustache:+:duck:=:heart:
:scootangel:+:moustache:=:heart:
:duck:+:moustache:+secret:scootangel:= :facehoof:
Spike your in troublllllllllllllllllllle

Spike, you just let hell break loose:facehoof:

she just needs some green fire to re convince her.

spike and rarity, there are no substitutes!!

You really need to continue this :eeyup:

Why can't Spike just fucking listen to his reason for once....:facehoof:

Oh sweet luna sh:yay:t is about to hit the fan spike u better fix this quick bro:facehoof:

Ain't no grave can hold his body down.

Ok beside the fact I'm enjoying this story just two things.

One: Twilight is more like a older sister to Spike.

Two: Scootaloo's mane is purple not pink.

Well nice going Spike. You done goof, and this WILL backfire on you part.

spike why do you constantly fuck up

I'm enjoying this. I like seeing a scootaloo x Spike pairing for once. Good work and keep it up.

MINE !:raritycry:

mine:scootangel:
:twilightoops: Mine !

:derpytongue2: I just don't know what went wrong !

This is an example doo doo and the fan set at high speed:pinkiegasp::flutterrage::rainbowhuh:

Dude it's been 3 1/2 years since your last chapter when will you upload again?

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