Our protagonist; Scarlet Ivy, experiences some "changes" in her life. Changes which will test her sanity, her pride and when she discovers the truth...
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Skepticaliz19
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Title based on a certain Johnny Cash song perhaps?
Is that picture what Chrysalis looks like in the story?
8243854 Yep! :D
824386 I wanted a pic that looks similar to Chryssie but that pic IS chrysie, which kinda sucks
8243872
Thought so.
Okay you got me interested by the story summary now I'm really into the plot of this.
Remove her finger *from* the gummy prison
(An 'It' would not be out of place here) Took most of my strength to get here *from* the *Badlands*
I know we've had *our* fights
Nor to take said foal from her *own* mother
I'm eager to see where this goes.
I feel for it hook line and sinker, better keeep me hooked. Btw i luv stories where chrysalis x shinning is a theme.
Dang! This really took me by surprise!
I'll be tracking this for sure!
8244558 Thank you :)
This is very good so far, and I can't wait to read more of it.
I really took me by surprise. definitely following
8244995
You're welcome!
A lighting bolt came down, striking the filly's horn, surging through her and Chrysalis before fading into the ground in its blinding light. What was left, only a steaming, unconscious Queen Chrysalis and Ivy...was nowhere to be found.
all i can think of is AND I SMITE THE SO YOU CAN DO NO HARM TO ANYONE
8250443 Smite the like button?
8250570
i have smited thy like butten it was a worthy foe indeed
8250601Nice!
8250751
indeed the battle lasted for days neither side giving a inch
hello 8250751 Question. The queen is the mother of the hive? I ask because I'm collecting all the stories where the queen is the mother of the hive
Here is the address
https://www.fimfiction.net/bookshelf/851658/queen-mother-of-the-hives
8254126 So far, in this story, she's just the mother to Scarlet :)
8254292what a pity.
But still I will continue reading your idea is interesting
Okay, cool beginning, I'm curious to see what happens next, and I too have smitten thy like button, though truth to tell I think the poor things getting a little punchy from all the smiting...
8277765 I don't think it was the story that got me all the likes, but the video xd
I clicked it for the story, and smote it for the video...
Annnnnd. It's dead.
Come on, please don't let this story die.
will there be more?
ITS ALIVE
Yay
I’m interested in this and see that Thorax’s actions for friendship cause have consequences. I beileve that the Changelings new transformation will have a negative effect on them.
Yay!
It's alive.
Please tell why 'this took so long?
Awesome concept!!!!
*mutters to self* Why didn’t i think of something like this...!
Moar please!!!!!!!
PS. Smol writing tip (hate to be a mom or whatever) but something that you can do when describing how Scarlet felt to the changes is describing how you would react to the changes. Y’know, heart pumping, unsettling confusion, racing thoughts etc. you’ll find u have a lot more to write :)
8509485 Well, it's been a long time since I've written anything, so I kinda just wanted to see what I can do, without diving too far, to get back into the swing of thingz.
8510108
okay
So, uh...is this delay between chapters going to be a usual thing? I understand if you’re busy or something, but what’s going on?
More please
*poke*
"Complaints on such a huge update delay? TELL ME ABOUT EM!!!!" Your words, not mine
Will this get an update soon momalysis is pretty cute
This Story is Dead in the Water.
Mostly Because the Writer Quit