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Cider Hall Productions


Together 2=1, combined we are Cider Hall Productions here to bring you stories of the fandom. My friends may we both welcome you into the hall, the great hall....The Cider Hall. Find us on youtube.

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Going through out their day as the royal sisters normally would, attending delegation meetings to just keeping up public appearances. That is until one trip to the Castle's library changes everything in their daily lives, a chapter in their mothers journal. A forgotten chapter.

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 13 )

Nice. Im interstate.

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Thanks, it's good to hear that it's my first stop and was little nervous to hit submit.

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Don't worry about it this place is for having fun although You're gonna how to deal with a lot of assholes. I'm an a****** too but your story has something that I truly like. Remember just keep having fun.:rainbowdetermined2:

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There are various things for exsample there is an older brother for Celestia and Luna also he was evil or I don't know what reason I will have to find out later. The are more but it dosent matter.

Hey, I really like how this story is going, I've always liked bat ponies. Just one thing though, try putting the story in present tense. Saying "Luna walks across the throne room" just doesn't ring well. Try, " Luna walked across the throne room". Other than that, I love it.:twilightsmile:

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whats wrong with dark tempest beind interstate

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i know i did it intentionally to mess with yuh

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So that weird ass conversation aside....How you liking the story?

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I kinda made that she has a weak spot, cause she herself was a villain.

Hey I know it’s been awhile since you last updated so plz consider updating this story it was pretty interesting to see how the story was going to be done.

Very interesting hopefully you update

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