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Curtis Brandstetter, is your typical 20 year old, with a small apartment and a steady job. But that soon changes when he crashes face first into Celestia's bedroom floor.
Now he is stuck in a world of multicolored ponies, with no way back. Now he must find a new job, make some money and get a house to start his new life. But in a world where a Cutie mark determines what you can do, is no place for someone who can't get one.
CANCELED, I MIGHT DO A REMAKE.
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2392722 It's Curtis. Anything is possible. ANYTHING... You can either embrace the madness, or.......crap. I forgot the rest.
Well shit! Now I have to watch out for random wormholes now since it runs in the family now
Bipolar much?
I bet Zecora can make better potions than anything modern pharmaceutical companies can churn out.
deviantart.com/download/329345121/dan_vs___one_angry_little_man_by_naked_sasquatch-d5g30bl.jpg
The above image is how i pictured Curtis
Curtis = one bad man
When guards are repeatedly ignoring their own ruler, it may be time to speak like Luna.
2402556 Yep
WTF!? Celestia's guards ignores her? I think that somehow might count as some kind of mutiny...
2404930 Yep. Foreshadowing for something in the future.
That was a bit... unexpected. But I love Story's, when they are unexpected^^
2406232 What a twist
I DEMAND MORE GODDAMN CUSSING MOTHERFUCKERS!!!!!!!!
2414482 I'm having trouble with the third chapter. If you want to help just send me some ideas that you want to happen and I'll see what I can do.
2415556 Have Curtis blow up something
2415620 NO GOD! NO! NO GOD NO! NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!
2415648
that actually sounds pretty badass. and and make him give luna a hornjob without realizing what he's doing. kekekekeke
2416739 Awkward moments... Interesting, yet I already have some idea on whats going to happen in the next chapter. I could send you the link to it so you can preview it if you want.
2416748
i would love that and in return have this gif
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2416771 Epic. Thanks for the help. also I managed to figure out what I want in chapter three. I'll send you the link via PM so you can preview what I have done so far.
2416902
any time my eldrich friend
Yeah. I bet Curtis will be all like Rambo. you know with the headband and bow that shoots explosive arrows and all that stuff. Can't wait for the next chapter
2421434 They drew first blood, not him.
2427825 all the more reason for him to go all Rambo on them
Celestia, Luna and the guard act way too OoC to make this story enjoyable.
A guard should not DISOBEY Celestia; and Celestia don't talk so casual with the guards ( first chapter for exemple, Celestia saying " ASAP " is just not plausible ).
Not enough description or interraction, it's just dialogue.
Yeah uh bro the characters are in fact acting bit OoC (Out of Character) also Celestia was talking a bit to casually in fact she kinda sorta doesn't talk so casually. Also you need to be more descriptive and try not to be so dialogue heavy. Also remember to indent your paragraphs (just hit the tab key) hope this helps ^^
2546971>>2547073 Thanks and thanks. That is one of my weak points when writing. I will try my best to fix that in the next chapter if it's alright with you^^
For some odd reason, I now have this thought of the changelings singing the song from snow white that the dwarves were singing. I think my broken is brain.
2548274 up is down, left is right. gnihtyreve si sdorwkcab. pleh em!!
I see Desrium made your coverart. The guy works fast...And he's pretty good at it.
2548584 you still writing this?
2990487 I've hit writers block so, at the moment not yet. If you have any ideas on what you want to happen next then PM me.
Hmm...this is an intersting concept...I'll take a look at it...
3001285 Sadly I hit writers block. If you have any suggestions please PM me.
This is a good story, but the character is a little TOO moody. I don't know much about depression... but if it makes this guy mood swing like a girl that's PMS'ing...well I wouldn't want depression!
I seen some protagonist like this. It's either,
"OMG TALKING HORSES, ASDFHJKL! *random freak out/ violence*"
Or
Has a cursing fit and freaks out with screaming and overreacting language.
I would like to see a protagonist that has a laid back nature to him and has a calm head with things. The random screaming, cursing, and violence isn't really required. I'm pretty sure they have a calm spell lying around with everything else!
4793343 You do have a good point there. To be honest I'm not proud of this story. So I canceled it, and I'm working on a new one.
Sadly I haven't finished it, because I find myself with less and less time dedicated to writing. Mostly because I'm moving house, and going to college, but mostly it's because I'm lazy and want to write about other things besides MLP.