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Octavia isn't the type of mare to mix up with suspicious crowds. She stays away from ponies who are different from herself, never giving them second thought, never considering the fact that they might be friendly.
But what happens if Octavia doesn't have a choice? What if she needs one of these uncouth ponies she so despises, and avoids at all costs? And mostly, what will her family say if she goes as far as to fall in love with one?

Rated teen for some minor sexual themes

This beautiful new cover pic is by the great and powerful (in my opinion) RainbowShy1241. A big huge thanks to you, because it's awesome!

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This is not my best work, but it's still here. the beginning was actually written before i found this site, but recently i've picked it up again. so, here you guys go. I hope you like it.:rainbowkiss:

I wish I had time to at least begin this. Fortunately, I'm a sucker for OctaScratch, so a star to track for later is yours.

I see where this is going. I love to see Vinyl and Octavia together... It just seems right.

OMG!!!!! Love It helariously awsome.

Lol it seems like Vinyl to drug somepony then fuck them. I hope that they do end up together tho.

Awsome!! MORE... I WANT MORE!

THIS IS THE MOST AMAZING STORY EVER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!:derpyderp1::pinkiehappy:

The fic reminds me to much of the plot to fight club

i have never seen/heard of fight club, so any resemblance is totally coincedental. sorry:pinkiehappy:

This is the best chapter (in my opinion) so far! :twilightsmile: I usually hate love stories but all these fanfics have me addicted now :derpyderp2:

Good chapter. But I hope that Octavia's parents find out, it would just be funnier that way. :derpytongue2:

Shit... I've been reading so many fanfics that I fogot everything up to now. I guess I have to start from the begining. AAWWW YYEEEAAAAHHH. 'Goes to first chapter'

Sweet two chapters in one day!!!! This is awsome. But kinda short :fluttershysad:

Dun dun duuuun! The suspense will now kill me until I read more! Moar! :twilightoops:

Holy shit how did you do to get three new chapters in one bucking day... Oh well, I'm not complaining, more to read then. :pinkiehappy:

Now about the story... BITCH YOU DON'T TALK TO TAVI THAT WAY :flutterrage: ... Fiew now that I got that out of my system, awsome chapter can't wait for more. By what I've previously said hopefully today. :pinkiesmile:

Fear not, my bronies.
Moar is coming as fast as I can write. Which, I might add, is pretty damn fast. I'm about a third of the way through the next chapter already!:pinkiehappy:

I'm liking this story more and more! The short and sweet updates keep me checking my email for updates lol. Have all of my likes! :twilightsmile:

Yay a fourth update today... I love that, you update so fast. But you should cool down a little cause then you might lose the ability to update fast and end up hardly updating at all. All that said, I hope to see more soon. :yay:

Thanks for all the likes and stuff.:derpytongue2: And, I must admit, two of the chapters i uploaded today were written yesterday, so i'm not quite so amazing as you might think. Also, this much time spent typing away at my computer merely indicates that I have no life whatsoever. But i don't give a flying buck. Ponies are my life, at the moment.:twilightsheepish:

Octavia's father said jovially as they came downstairs and sat down t breakfast.

I really like your story (VinylxOctavia is my OTP) But your pacing seems a little fast. From "'Tav, that mare who helped me was your mother" to "Then it isn't my fault?" I was like: :rainbowhuh::rainbowhuh::rainbowhuh: Octavia had an aunt? That raised Vinyl? And now she's dead just like that? I get that you're telling us a bit of their past while getting both of them through what just happened to them, but it seems a little... soap-opera-ish.

That said I like that they don't always get along, and have completely different viewpoints on everything. Vinyl's comment a chapter or two back of "Can we make out now?" sounded a lot like her! Overall it's a good story you've got going here and I definitely want to see more! :raritywink:

ok without a doubt this is a fabulously adorable chapter and good job on the story so far CharmingChaos:rainbowkiss:

this was a good chapter but their was a few mistakes none to serious all in all fabulous:rainbowkiss:

fabulous chapter i thought the mom would be the one to freak out i guess i was right but now what is the dad goingto say\do about what has just been said and what is going on also :rainbowkiss:

I really liked what you did with Octavia's thoughts on all the homophobia, I thought it was quite interesting.

More on topic, great story! I'll definitely be tracking this :pinkiehappy:

FABULOUS i like the not ending much better cant wait for the next installment of this chapter:rainbowkiss:

Bravo sir, bravo, i can't wait for the next part

Hehe. I'm a sir now. :twilightblush:
Actually I'm a girl, but whatevs. Thanks!

fabulous chapter im glad this story updates so often its just awesome:rainbowkiss:

It just keeps getting better and better

Can't wait for the next update. This is the first story I've read with these two ever, but I have to say you've formed my headcanon for them.
I do have some advice though...especially at the start, it feels rushed. Like...she was against having Vinyl, and then she isn't? After the first few chapters, I think it goes a lot smoother, but the start just feels rushed. Also, the part with the twin sister I don't think was needed-it just sorta confused me and I was like...why is that even there?

But yeah, love the story! Can't wait for the next chapter!

Lol I read both. My favorite was the ending, but I wanted to read the not ending so that it wouldn't be the end... If you know what I mean. They were both perfect.

sorry for all the typos. :twilightblush:
but I'm grounded from the computer until tomorrow, so proof reading will have to wait

Not bad. Kinda saw that coming though... but maybe that's because i read too much of these lol... anywho looking forward to the next part if there is one!

Awesome! When you added in the bit about the test, I thought she would be pregnant, but still, really good and emotional. I loved it. Yet again another great chapter! :heart:

I still love how sweet their romance is, but I certainly think this pregnancy thing is a little silly. But oh well, it hasn't thrown me off too much!

Such a cute chapter. Wondering what all Vinyl's fears are up to, though... But yeah, cute chapter. Just wish there was more to it.

942767 The pregnancy thing is kinda weird, but I wanted them to have a filly--er, foal at some point, and Vinyl going to the doctor's just seemed like a good time for them to find out. :rainbowkiss:
942878 More is coming. Just as soon as I decide whether it's a filly or a colt. It's a hard choice.:twilightblush:

943014 If it helps, I vote filly. A colt would be cool, but...I dunno. Just think a filly would be better for them.

943014 I agree with PinkieShyy, I'd vote filly, then you could explore how different them raising a child would be to Octavia's parents raising her. More freedom and what not :yay:

I thought filly as well. It just seems... right, y'know?:pinkiesmile:

Sweet Moments like these make me feel all warm and fuzzy inside and man do I love it.

It's getting good, am i right to assume we'll be meeting the baby next chapter?

I cant wait to meet little Vintavia. (Okay, bad names to try to mix, specially when you arent good at it). Still, its exciting, since i wanna see how you've made their reactiins.

943883 I agree it's getting to the best part-- writing about little fillies is super fun!:pinkiegasp:
944428 Hehe. Vintavia. But one of my best friends already gave me a name. But you won't find that out for a while. It's a secret.:scootangel:

Last two chapter were just fabulous can't wait for next to come out:rainbowkiss:

Can't wait for the next chapter this is an awsome story.

little short but im loving this cant wait to see the little filly grow up (if its that long)

I have to say that I'm surprised that anyone would like the, as 934346 so rightly put it, "Half-assed" ending. But I kinda had to give Sonata a chance to not be so bitchy. (Is that even possible:pinkiegasp: can a mare be bitchy?)

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