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This is a sequel to my other story, A Tale of Two Mares. Read that one first.
Anyhow, Vinyl Scratch and her trusty new wife Octavia are living in San Franciscolt, trying to make a decent living, raise a foal (or two), and not drive each other the neighbors crazy.
Some old favourites, and some ponies that are notorious for being awful, will come to make their lives a little easier(?) and some new ponies as well, for better or for worse.

Oh my Celestia, I just made that sound like the most boring story ever. You'll just have to read the first one.

And, the awesomely adorable cover pic is by my trusty (me gusta the word trusty, it seems) brony friend, RainbowShy1241. He's a very good artist (obviously) and he made that for me! Yay!

Chapters (16)
Comments ( 421 )

FYI, I kinda made up the equestrian school system:twilightsheepish:.
So, First School is Kindergarten, first, second, and third grade, and maybe preschool, but that's not important. (Yet.)
Secondary School is fourth through sixth grade.
Middle School is just like ours, 7th and 8th, maybe 9th.
And HS may or may not be used in this, probably not, but it's 10th through 12th, obviously.
There you go. The reason for this is that I needed Tambourine to be starting at a new school and she's not middle school age. But seriously, the Ponyville schoolhouse has like only young children, and it appears to be a one room schoolhouse, so the other students must be at another site.
Whee. I just made a full evaluation of the Equestrian School System (ESS for future reference) I'm turning into a Twilight.:twilightsheepish:

Ok I was a little worried at first as to how this sequel would work but from the look of things I think that this will be just as enjoyable as its predecessor! The only part I dislike is waiting on new chapters which is why I waited so long to read a tale of two mares, but I'm sure it'll be worth the wait!

1238339 Yeah... ya kinda missed the fast part. There were times in the summer when I wrote two or three chapters a day, because I was a lifeless brick with nothing better to do.
Now, however, what with this accursed Highschool I am forced to go to, the chapters will only be about once a week (probably.) But I'm bad at that, so it may be sooner.:twilightsheepish:

1238498 It's all good and to be fair my obscene amount of free time doesn't help my dislike of waiting for stories in general. No job + being a college graduate can be so dull at times, but stories, such as yours, do manage to brighten my day. How could they not with cute adorableness such as Tamby being featured along with my favorite ship! Nevertheless best of luck with both your own adventures in high school and writing this story.:twilightsmile:

Could the plan be to have another kid? Is Octavia going to carry it this time? Will Tamby be upset about the sibling? Tune in next time. Same Bat-time! Same Bat-channel!

My favorites list lied to me, and told me there was no chapters for this story but i could feel it. Man, i can't wait for more of this story. :heart::heart:

Loved it, need more! :rainbowkiss:

Hooray!

PS: Y U NO APPEAR IN MY FAVOURITES FEED?

PPS: Think you left out a tag in the texting bit.

PPPS: Yes I did put postscripts in a one word message. Sue me:trollestia:

I liked it, but I'm kinda disappointed that Tamby it's the same cute filly that defended her mums from her granmother :pinkiesad2: alas I guess I just have to get used to it

This was a great start. I now join the legions of people crying out for MOAR! :flutterrage:

Time for a little sister little Tamby! Tamby's sure going to get grumpy; less attention for her in her angsty phase.

Instant read/fav/like. Like always.
You're amazing. Keep it up :3

inb4 Featured...

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(At least, it better had, or I'll look like an idiot! xD)

(...)

(Wait, how is that any different from any OTHER day?! XD)

one or two of your bits - o - scripting got messed up in there. The main one being in the texting bit. Otherwise I love this.

1241387 I know, right?
I got it from this awesome dude, RainbowShy1241.
Thanks, by the way. I still love it.:twilightblush:

yay its up time to read!

edit:wait...foal(or two)..

Here you go, guys.:pinkiehappy: Tamby gets a little sib. Not gonna say what though, that would ruin everything.

What. da. fuq. just. happened? :rainbowderp:

1242853 yeah... it's confusing because it's from Octy's point of view, and she's confused. But they are gonna have another foal! huzzah, I get to write that again!:pinkiehappy:

guys we need to think of another name again quick get paper and pens!!:heart:

Another foal :yay:!!!! I know you won't say what it is yet but still....colt or filly ooooohhhh can't wait to find out.

1243506 Awww. You guys are so sweet.:pinkiesad2:
Maybe I'll make a blog where you can suggest/vote on names for the new baby. But it'll be a while, because we still have to get through the pregnancy.
Do you think it'll be easier for Octy because she doesn't have the typical unicorn magic-doesn't-work symptom to cope with? Maybe earth ponies are weaker...
Anyway, I don't know. She'll probably just have normal, boring human symptoms.
But seriously, do think about names. I might have them name him/her before she's born like practical ponies.

Right when i saw the title and cover art i was all

images.sodahead.com/profiles/0/0/0/1/7/3/5/6/7/aww-yeah-82995248846.png


Fuck swag (throws swag away) This guys got class (puts class on)!

1243731 well earth ponies i think are stronger but there might be side-effects since its magic based

If this is a miscarriage storyline, some one's getting a slap on the face, Charming. :ajbemused:

me4

I have a serious pregnancy fetish, me gusta.:rainbowkiss: No really I do, it's kind of weird how deep it is. Sometimes the female reproductive system is all I can think about. Aaaand that is why I like reading about it so much.:pinkiesmile:

1245555 Don't worry, it's not. I don't want Tamby to get slapped.:pinkiesmile:

1246034 oh OK that's a relieve. And how dare you suggest I would slap ta by. I am insulted, good lady.

1246047 Who else would you slap? I thought that's what you meant, that's why I agreed. Well, actually I agreed because I never had that idea in the first place, but...
Also, my friend threatened to kill Tamby if I didn't say Linkin Park (she's dangerously obsessed with them-- oh, who am I kidding, I'm dangerously obsessed with ponies:pinkiehappy:. Anyways) my friend said she'd murder Tambourine if I didn't say Linkin Park is Better then Ponies.
There's a dead body to deal with now.:pinkiecrazy:
But don't worry, it's only my old friend's - not Tamby, she's perfectly safe in my bulletproof cage:pinkiecrazy:

"Now, look here, Doc. I performed the spell last night, least night

I believe that its "last night" for the repeated word.

But this was an awesome chapter! Can't wait for more!

...I have no idea whay happened :rainbowhuh:.....but i like it

What is that.... what the fuck is that? HOLY CELESTIA, WHAT THE FUCK IS THAT?!

For filly names:

Quartz
Destra
Melisma
Sonora
Sordina
Crescenda
Caprice
Viola
Melody
Seraphine( Sera for short)
Sonata
Symphony
Vivica

For colt names:

Coda
Chord
Taiko
Axel
Arion
Jax

Names for either:

Staccato
Stanza
Bass Clef
(other Clef types)
Rhapsody

It's a chest burster! AAAARRRGHH!!!!

But woah, way to unintentionally fuck up something in the worst posible way Vinyl. Pregnant in only a couple of hours?

Wait, does that mean the foal is going to age equally fast? Uh oh.

Pregnancy + rocket engines...this can't be good.

A name that came to mind was "Grace Note", because it's a little note played really fast, and the foal showed up really fast.
Like, blink and you'll miss it fast.

....at least she's not doing the year's worth of morning sickness, too. That would just be awkward.

1249873 That is a very good name. I actually had considered it for Tambourine, before the Great and Powerful Izzy (That is who came up with Tambourine. She's not a brony, but she calls herself that in usernames and such. So, I call her trixie:trixieshiftleft:)
I'll use it if I decide it's a girl, i think. But I don't know.
1249673 Interesting idea, the aging fast too thing. I hadn't thought of that.
1249627 oh, and thanks for that enormous list. I will definitely add them to my consider list. Other then Crescenda and Sonata.
Did you not read the one before this? Octy's mom is was Sonata, and her dad is Crescendo, so they wouldn't really work. Especially because she kinda... doesn't have a good relationship with her parents.

1249918

Oh sorry. I kind of scanned the internet for some musical terminology at random. And I HAVE read the story before this, I just tend to forget characters that I REALLY hate in fan-fics :derpytongue2:

Please let it be a little sister :pinkiehappy: pretty please

I can just imagine tamby's reaction when they tell her " Oh hey, just so you know your going to have a little sister or brother by the end of the day so be ready."

Please let this one be a filly as well!! I think the interaction between two sisters would be much more interesting. Also I liked the Grace Note suggestion from earlier in the comments. Really liked the chapter especially the urgency with the 7-month pregnancy overnight.

...well THAT was expectedly unexpected with a hint of expectedness.

Idk any names :trixieshiftright:

But a solid chapter indeed

Great stuff! Can't wait for the next chapter.
Maybe Viola for a filly?

Its good, bjt FIX THAT FUCKING COLOR!:flutterrage: Most of the story is freaking blue!

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