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I think you need to improve your...everything, to be honest.
8175902 can you be a bit more specific?
This is going to be good!
8175903 Grammar, the way characters speak, sometimes you don't capitalize speech, quite a few spelling errors etc.
8175912 Well, as minor as it is. I'll be sure to fix it. Thanks for the tip.
This story has potential, I'll put this in my To-Read-Later list.
8175914 I think you've also fallen into the trap of way too many tags. Maybe limit the tags to what the story you have in mind is mainly about, instead of that mess
8175926 well, the tags are for future chapters, just need to be patient mate
War? Will there be war? ;-;
8175929 Yes, but not now, I'm going to build it up
Lol is u ded?
8175957 no, why? 'Cause I'm very alive!
Dude, such a great idea, please, keep working on this.
8176100 I will, and on the way, if I happen to make any mistakes, comment down what it is and I'll be happy to fix it.
Good story. Also nice to see a story relating to WW1 and The German Empire.
8176140 yeah, there's little to no stories about WWI, so I thought to myself, 'why not?'.
Oh this is gonna be good
Now this is going to be good. So...Very...GOOD...
ok, Was?
My problem here is that they recognize the word "English" when they shouldn't have.
My problem here is they carelessly told potential enemies the name of their own ruler.
Other than that, you have some grammatical errors. I'm not German nor do I know German, but I'm willing to be your editor. Just PM me if you're interested.
please learn some german parts of it in this chapter are really bad
8176854 they're going to get knocked down by the guns dude.
8176865 I'll be sure to fix that, give me a sec... and there.. all good.
8176870 sorry, I'm still learning, but I'll be sure to fix it. There, let me know if it's any better.
8176881 if you ever need help just message me or something
8176905 I'll be sure to do that
8176871
i know, but as a german, what you wrote simply didn't make sense
Really the allies are breaking the truce because of the change of weather? I don't think so.. but good story so far.
8177155 do you think he used google translate?
8177211
quite possibly, that explains why it sounds like they shouldn't change their clothes
now it sounds even sillier
better would be
AT least now it makes sense
8177226 man if there are three languages i just would love to learn, it would be Japanese, German, and English.
8177054 yes, he is
Without the harsh treaty Germany will prosper once again like it always has. In this scenario conflict will be inevitable but it wont be started by germany but another country afraid of the change in the balance of power. First off, Germany was not really the aggressor in the war, he had no choice because helping Austria-Hungary in her war with Serbia prompted them to war with Russia whom was allied with france. So, with war on multiple front they acted like napoleon would do and gone for the offensive.
Here, we might see a triving Germany like today, that heavily influences the countries near him, in this case more so because of their machinery and german engineering and science. They had plans for an early concept of a jet engine.
But as I said, a country suddenly appearing that is vastlly superior in technology and, soon, economy will be the cause of a fear fueled war to those who would like to hold onto power. In this case, the Griffins. I think.
For the story, I think it has an interesting premise. It's missing something but I still can't put my finger on it so I'll save that for later. For the introduction of Equestria and the Griffins things could have been better. I do like to see more of this, see where it would go.
8179072 damn, I've never met anyone that knew his history better than me. I know my history too, but you know exactly what kind of conflict would occur. I'm fucking impressed
8179245 I like European history. So many Ideals, myths, and wars one can only see through so much perspective from different sides with different stories.
8179894 I do too. I like to study the world wars during my free time
8179899 there are a lot of interesting ones from the days of the roman empire too. History is like a big book, really.
8179913 it really is
Make Germany the Independent country it is!
So Germany got transported after the armistice of compiegne?
At this point Wilhelm II had left Germany for Spa in Belgium.
And a most of germanys armed forces were deployed in France or the eastern front and outside of german borders so they would have been left behind.
8182987 wilhelm the 2 was till his death in the netherlands not belgium
i hope they either go an independant route or side with the griffons
8183046 the timeline takes place just before Germany had a chance to sign the armistice; The Treaty of Compeigne
8183521 I try my best to get back to everyone in the comments. I'm glad you enjoy the story
Extraterrestrial, abnormal, something that is out of the ordinary. Away from the norm. Humans are a fearful race, surely the trained soldiers would be able to operate through training, discipline, and protocols but the masses would be terrified. And terrified humans are dangerous, they lash out, protest! I don't know about the others but the masses won't take easy on the horses and griffin things. They might call for restrictions, segregation, or even isolation just to keep the normal life as sane as they know what it is. So the chances of Germany allying with any country would either be simply through trade and that's it. Anything more should have a good reason because chances of the people going against an unknown alien, nonhuman, neighbours would be certainly be morelikely.
Remember the old times, and sometimes, the unkown is always called a monster. And, humans don't like monsters.
8183392
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8183426
Versailles was a peace treaty not an armistice.
The armistice stopped fighting at the West and southern fronts.
Versailles ordered the europe anew.
The Armistice of compiegne was signed on 11 November 1918.
The Treaty of Versailles was signed on 28 June 1919.
This is important because for an example the germany navy sunk itself on 21 June 1919 in Scapa Flow.
8183643 "the timeline takes place just before Germany had a chance to sign the armistice; The Treaty of Compeigne". What are you talking about?
Ich approve of zis story.