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Crimson Dragon
Love everything about the show; the characters, the music, and the world. I also love well done crossovers.
Crimson Dragon
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Being a very, very huge~Berserk fan, I'm alright with this and hope to see more when the future comes, darling.
You're my first commenter; that's awesome!
Thanks for reading and enjoying the story. If you have any feedback to give I will gladly except it.
You sir have earned yourself a follower, followed with a like, and a favorite. Now, keep pumping out these chapters. o.o
Working on it right now sir! And you're my second commenter! I'm so happy you like the first chapter so much you want to follow and add it to your favorites. I promise to try to put out quality material, and I hope you'll continue to give feedback. Oh and tell your friends. :)
I will put this in the Read it later folder. When there is more chapter I will take a look.
Ok, a few things, some good and some bad.
Good: Very well written and descriptive, details were used liberally and appropriately. Also if I didn't already know where this was going I would be quite intrigued and the ending was fantastic, loved it.
Bad: Some spelling and grammatical errors but as your editor that's partly my fault. One in particular: I almost died laughing when you said "the smell of something fowl" because that kind of fowl is a bird and I just imagined Tartarus smelling like chicken. Other than that it was great.
This pony has a wicked hard-on for killing shit, and with that sword, he will fulfill his desires!
Made some minor edits to the first chapter, most of which were the description of the sword. I made it match Dragonslayer's appearance better.
And the other corrections were just previous grammar mistakes. Also second chapter is almost complete.
do you know anything about when chapter 338 is coming out?
No sir I do not, but if it's anything like the other Berserk chapters it won't be for a while.
Lovely chapter good sir, I will be waiting till you have created the next chapter.
"Shadows fly away!!!"
How much longer till the next chapter?
Wonderful! I do hope you update this again, the premise is so good and I'd love to see Twilight and friends reaction to Guts/Crimson Ire. Great chapter, keep goin and stay golden^^
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Well, this story good so far, look forward to reading more when more chapters come out in the later future.
PS: Oh and one more thing... Here's Crimson Ire's theme songs! Take your pick!
1. [youtube=dIoILN_KrhU]
2. [youtube=gV26zIE0130]
3. [youtube=IrOliVhbBo8]
4. [youtube=73WWpKyuWL4]
Go on.
UPDATE!!!!!!!
I know it's been a while since it's been posted but damn is this a good read. A really good adaptation of Guts and I really want to see this continued
Please make more I really love Berserk and want more of this