Being a very, very huge~Berserk fan, I'm alright with this and hope to see more when the future comes, darling.

You're my first commenter; that's awesome! Thanks for reading and enjoying the story. If you have any feedback to give I will gladly except it.

You sir have earned yourself a follower, followed with a like, and a favorite. Now, keep pumping out these chapters. o.o

Working on it right now sir! And you're my second commenter! I'm so happy you like the first chapter so much you want to follow and add it to your favorites. I promise to try to put out quality material, and I hope you'll continue to give feedback. Oh and tell your friends. :)

I will put this in the Read it later folder. When there is more chapter I will take a look.

Ok, a few things, some good and some bad.

Good: Very well written and descriptive, details were used liberally and appropriately. Also if I didn't already know where this was going I would be quite intrigued and the ending was fantastic, loved it.
Bad: Some spelling and grammatical errors but as your editor that's partly my fault. One in particular: I almost died laughing when you said "the smell of something fowl" because that kind of fowl is a bird and I just imagined Tartarus smelling like chicken. Other than that it was great.

This pony has a wicked hard-on for killing shit, and with that sword, he will fulfill his desires!

Made some minor edits to the first chapter, most of which were the description of the sword. I made it match Dragonslayer's appearance better. And the other corrections were just previous grammar mistakes. Also second chapter is almost complete.

Go on.