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I’m a guy that enjoys writing stories about ponies and usually super-powered humans, and the occasional strange story. Nuff said.
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This is good keep going.
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I'm planning on it
Things are about to get interesting.
love they automaticaly think changeling and he really just doesn't care, but that be my reaction too if i had an omnitix
I like the plot line, but that grammar... You should look for an editor just to fix your sentences. Aside that this is 100% Approved by (Mind is drawing a blank but I think the guy's name was Tektracks or something, creator of the omnitrix)
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Yea I like how everything is going with it too. But you are right I do need to look for a reliable editor
8163347 I might be able to help from time to time, got a fairly busy schedule but I am more than happy to kick you off the right path.
8163433
I'd like the help! I'm actually planning on working on the next chapter either for the rest of today or next Friday
8163437 Do you know how to work Google Docs?
8163449
I use it to write my chapters but I think I know how to work with someone on it
While chances are very low I'm ever going to read a Merchant/Displaced fic. I have to know something.
Does he become the Fresh Prince of Bel-Air?
For those not familiar with Ben10, while the description of Blitzerwolf was adequate for this seemingly very fast paced kind of story telling, the utter lack of description for XLR-8 can be a touch off-putting to those not in the know.
He seems disturbingly unconcerned about not being in the convention or a familiar place anymore.
As for the rest, I worry about this human.
This was a great chapter. The Omnitrix has more then 10,000 alien dna.
8169239
I know but the only one's unlocked are 99 and thanks!
8169244 ah that makes sense. So wouldn't he be a girl if he changes into the earth pony since that is female dna
?
8169253
Hmmmm I don't know to e honest XD I wouldn't think
8169258 it would be really funny tho XD
8169259
Lets be honest it would LOL
8169259
8169262 There was one episode where Gwen wound up wirh the device. Her transformations were female. Ben's were male. It's cannon that the transformations follow the wearer's sex.
Honestly, though, I don't see the big deal. Species change trumps gender swap in the "my body's different" change.
8169307 nope wrong. Big chill was female Ben laid eggs remember.
8169320 didn't see many episodes, but Gwen deffinetly looked female. How do you know big chill wasn't hermaphroditic?
Also edited last post
8169307
I think Upgrade's species was actually genderless. When a new one was born it was simply a matter of mitosis...
8169239 True, but in the show we've seen maybe few dozen of them, or do you seriously espect the author to have creativity to create new aliens, and considering that he wrote self insert fanfic to little girls carton I highly doubt that.
It would be funny if since there are no male alicorns on the show that the magic of Equestria doesn't allow male alicorns therefore if he used the alicorns transformation it would make him into a female
...I feel like we missed something. When did he become friends with Twilight and the gang? Wasn't they like trying to catch him before?
Thunderbolt would have been better for the last part!
She's have thrown up AL OVER HIM when they got to the clubhouse.
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In the last chapter from AJ's description of Nick Twilight knew he was human, choosing to try to understand why he was here instead of try to capture him. Twilight located Nick and the two got too talking, she found him rather interesting so decided to give him a chance. Going to her friends who still saw him as a monster they had a brief fight only ended by Twilight. After that she convinced them Nick wasn't that bad and the whole group/town gave him a chance
8177228 oh ok
My favorite ben 10 aliens were Big Chill and XLR8, but I hate the redesign of Big Chill in Omniverse
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I kinda like the bulky Big Chill design. But that's just me XD
Question, and this is a silly question. Can your Displaced get new forms if he meets another Displaced?
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Meaning like can he get another form from a displaced that isn't human? Probably
8231081 Reason why I asked is that I was thinking we could cross-over.
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I'd love to do one!
Do those things really exist?
How come I'm longing for Vilgax to show up?
Edit: First post!
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Pethaps XD
8321076
He was the greatest villain in my opinion. Cold, calculating, and cruel, with no taint of ridiculousness in his backstory like most of the others. Plus he knew what he wanted and didn't care what it took to get it.
Eris, huh? I can see a few ways on how this will go.
Here cum dat sp00ky villain in time for SP00KT0B3R
SP00KTACULAR M8
I almost thought Ghostfreak was going to be the villain
8422001
It was the title wasn't it?
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Yep, not a bad way to keep readers guessing!
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^^ thank You!
8422415
Sadly, I dont think he'd enjoy a scan of my displaced. There would be a major risk of psycotic breakdown and an unhealthy fixation with any object that had a powerful energy field...
8422428
If that where the case he'd just use that form to find the villain XD story ended right there!
8422436
Until the uncontrollable urge to latch on to said villain and syphon all that power for himself took over. The energy would only increase the risk of a power mad psychosis. Which I guess would kinda be funny to see as his body would be a green anthropomorphic rabbit the size of a twelve year old child...