Nick Taylor thought it'd be a good idea to attend a local comic convention, after buying an Omnitrix from a merchant he is sen t to Equestria and sent down the heroes path as a result. Welp, this is his life now! Better get used to it.
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This is good keep going.
8163120
I'm planning on it
Things are about to get interesting.
love they automaticaly think changeling and he really just doesn't care, but that be my reaction too if i had an omnitix
I like the plot line, but that grammar... You should look for an editor just to fix your sentences. Aside that this is 100% Approved by (Mind is drawing a blank but I think the guy's name was Tektracks or something, creator of the omnitrix)
8163331
Yea I like how everything is going with it too. But you are right I do need to look for a reliable editor
8163347 I might be able to help from time to time, got a fairly busy schedule but I am more than happy to kick you off the right path.
8163433
I'd like the help! I'm actually planning on working on the next chapter either for the rest of today or next Friday
8163437 Do you know how to work Google Docs?
8163449
I use it to write my chapters but I think I know how to work with someone on it
While chances are very low I'm ever going to read a Merchant/Displaced fic. I have to know something.
Does he become the Fresh Prince of Bel-Air?
For those not familiar with Ben10, while the description of Blitzerwolf was adequate for this seemingly very fast paced kind of story telling, the utter lack of description for XLR-8 can be a touch off-putting to those not in the know.
As for the rest, I worry about this human. He seems disturbingly unconcerned about not being in the convention or a familiar place anymore.
Not a bad job, but it gets confusing on who's speaking at times.
-Dark
Ponies don't know their ben 10 aliens
I hate the blitzwolfer from the universe redesign.
I referred the one from the classic/or the ultimate alien.
But this is ok I guess.
Since he is with the ultimate i think this is the name??