Nick Taylor thought it'd be a good idea to attend a local comic convention, after buying an Omnitrix from a merchant he is sen t to Equestria and sent down the heroes path as a result. Welp, this is his life now! Better get used to it.
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...I feel like we missed something. When did he become friends with Twilight and the gang? Wasn't they like trying to catch him before?
Thunderbolt would have been better for the last part! She's have thrown up AL OVER HIM when they got to the clubhouse.
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In the last chapter from AJ's description of Nick Twilight knew he was human, choosing to try to understand why he was here instead of try to capture him. Twilight located Nick and the two got too talking, she found him rather interesting so decided to give him a chance. Going to her friends who still saw him as a monster they had a brief fight only ended by Twilight. After that she convinced them Nick wasn't that bad and the whole group/town gave him a chance
8177228 oh ok
My favorite ben 10 aliens were Big Chill and XLR8, but I hate the redesign of Big Chill in Omniverse
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I kinda like the bulky Big Chill design. But that's just me XD
Question, and this is a silly question. Can your Displaced get new forms if he meets another Displaced?
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Meaning like can he get another form from a displaced that isn't human? Probably
8231081 Reason why I asked is that I was thinking we could cross-over.
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I'd love to do one!
Quick question. When does this take place? All I know is it's after Equestria Girls.
-Dark
There's a huge amount of grammatical errors I've noticed and they're honestly a rather common one. Always and I repeat always start a new paragraph when someone else starts talking.
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At the bare minimum one should start a new line in a paragraph if changing characters talking in a scene fragment.
Too many short paragraphs can get annoying to read if not changing topic often enough to warrant so many new paragraphs.
I would prefer the ultimate alien big chill.
I really don't like this version is just oh my god