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CrAzY FaLcOn


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Seems promising like it so far even if there is only one chapter

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You might want to read it again. I noticed an inconsistency and edited it

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Has anyone figured out the riddle?

Comment posted by CrAzY FaLcOn deleted Feb 18th, 2020
Drr

If Seth absorbed all of aggregors abilities does that mean he actually posses the abilities that aggregor had or that he just turned them into raw power?

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He now has all of the powers Aggregor had, but you won't be able to see it due to the fact that Seth's form is locked. He can absorb anything and he'll look the same, unless he chooses not to.

Drr

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Ok. Thank you for clarifying

A little out of ideas.
Suggestions appreciated

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Cool. Oh, might I recommend getting a different cover for your story? I think there are some Ben 10 alien Maker games you could use to make what Seth should look like.

Drr

Is Seth going to have children like big chill?

This is a very intersting story, I have enjoyed this chapter throughly and I'm glad to have collabarated on this chapter.

Is it weird that I recognize each creepypasta? also most of the tumblrs of them has been erased, what a shame. Does anybody know if there is a story HiE with creepypasta mlp? please, not sanguine type. I mean whole interaction/surviving with them.

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pinkamena had 22 tumblr sites, Lil’ miss rarity(enfasis on Lil’) had 3, rainbow dash factory had 5 but with multiple interactions with others.
Butchershy had 3 but two of the were the same, the artist and time changed. Twilight researcher had 2 or 3, not many could pull it right.
Applejack had more of the writting creepypasta but the one most people confuse it, it’s crapplejack from the same author of Lil’ miss rarity (Lil’ miss jay)

I still remember the name of the deity in crappejack, genuvial. That tumbrl had all of the creepypastas above.

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You know that you could always make a chapter/crossover with a non-maked displaced.

This will likely be a very quick fight, with the power he absorbed from Sunset and Pinkie's ambient release he could beat an army of Lunas. So unless this Luna is a very very powerful very she will lose.

Drr

Are you counting the omni enhanced aliens from the reboot as ultimate's?

When even your synopsis sounds bored, you know you’ve run the displaced trope into the ground.

Going with number one

Huh bluebloods gay for the protagonist never thought I'd see the day

This is awesome! I wonder if ya can allow Seth to combine certain alien species to make a new one or perhaps allowing a possible new oc help them out? I can provide you with details if ya like.

Well blue immediately trusted this disgusting looking abomination of animals he has never seen while Bella a normal looking female was next to him he didn't say a word to her not even the slightest flirt blue blood wants the D

And the votes are in…
3: 1
2: 1
1: 3

Winner?
Sonic scream tactic.

If you're curious, these were the choices.
1… sonic screams
2… blue flames
3… sphere form

Sunset and Pinkie are very powerful

This is good. Can’t wait to see more

Most of this chapter is pure dialogue, not description nor narrative. It feels to rushed now because of the script.

Wonderful chapter, nice action. Keeping going

I wonder what that folder is.

Maybe notes on how to manage the energy absorption so you don't go crazier than a bag of cats?

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If that's a ref, nice but if not: what?

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